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by Wheezambu

person Lynn
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was just...extraordinary and frenzied. I really liked it. I really love your stories Wheez-chan. :)
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, i THOUGHT THE door was open!!!! intense! great lemon btw don't think I've told you that yet. I like that you do them only when needed and it fits with the story.
person ghettoside_gangsta
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was freakin' awsome!
person Nokomarie the Snake
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Coughs:: At least he was spared the awkward conversation afterwards. One hopes the practice gi wasn't too hard to put on.
person XRaven
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was some lemony goodness. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter of the Daiymo's Lover, even more so after that one-shot! Thanks for sharing.
person Kagome179
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol thats exactly how i would have pictured thier first time, and as i was reading i just knew there was something he forgot to(d'uh close the door). Funny yet embarrassing neither the less. great onshot