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for Love Eternal

by Aten

person Lore
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really sad. But very well written
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that story was so beautiful that i wanted to cry. if miroku had lived i would say make another chapter please, but i cant since he is dead. *crying silently* u should definitely write more inuyashaXmiroku stories.
person hm
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this could have been a much better lemon if Inuyasha and Miroku were actually properly characterized. to me, it felt like i was just reading about two males who happen to look like Inuyasha and Miroku fuck each other.

the narrative itself wasn't half bad, but i practically skimmed over much of it.
person Mina
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's soooooo sad! And so sweet!! *wipes away tears* It was beautifully written, I hope you make another fic with this pairing!!

Good job!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cue up panting track*
That was a heart tugger!! Even though I got the sniffles at the end, I still lurrrrrved it! (The part where Miroku was scratching behind Inuyasha's ears, *giggles* CUTENESS!)
Great job, huni!! *snuggles*
person lindsy
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* aaahhh....nnnooo, not miroku. he cant die. *kicks fiction* hehe. sorry. i hate it when Miroku dies, thats all...him and Sesshoumaru. anyways, now that my rant is done, great fic! write more...um, with no Miroku od Sesshoumru dieing. please? hehe. way to go ~.-