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for Seduction of Swords

by YoukaiObsessed

person Akaia-Sachi
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so awesome! I LOVE your pairings! I just felt compelled to review your coolness. ^_^
person Life
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Are you ever going to update? Haha, please update soon! It's been forever! :)
person SilverTsubasa0011
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH MORE
person adry
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!The story is very beautiful and very very interesting!!!!!!!!!!
person ANti-Candle
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Love 1-4, so lets have a chapter 5!!!!!!!!! I can't wait much longer!! Please update! :)
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the e-mails on the updates. I was away and missed the last 2 chapters. Goodness you should have put a warning in both of those chapters, telling of sizzling men masturbating. It's great how Sephiroth is straightforwardly lusting for Sesshoumaru, but Sesshoumaru is fighting it. Did you know dogs really act like that with certain scents? Their whole demeanor changes, that’s what I thought of when Sesshoumaru responded to Sephiroth’s ejaculation on his hand. He went from calm and reserved to throwing his clothes. Please let me know when you update again, I fancy you style of writing, it’s unique.

I adore you. I want to have your little babies. (Smiles)
person nighty
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i say it would be a good idea to cut on the unnecessary bits of description and try to use 'he' instead of repeating the same stuff. lol can't wait to know what sephy will do :D :D
person kinky lurker
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
boo!

(panting) okay... that was hot... (glomps and straddles) that was a wonderful solo for hanyou... now... let's get a duo going, ne?

(ahem) well, this is a great story. i love every word of it. (i saw a few mistakes but nothing major, it's still really, really good!) first of all, sesshoumaru's reaction to the smell of sephiroth on his hand... (drool) talk about hotness... hanyou is drowning in her chair... <<" are you so sure you want to be retired? i don't think you do...

back to the story... (see how distracted i am) gomen nasai it took so long to read and review this, i've been behind and a little busy with some things, ne? you understand? (sniffles) this was hot. i can't wait to see how the two of them go at each other like rabbits in heat. i mean, if they get off so easily just fighting and smelling arousal and seed, then hot damn... hanyou forsees lots of hot sex with the two of them. not to mention the fact that the two of them are just gorgeous bishies and should always be fucking other bishes... you're story is awesome! i love it! i can't wait for the next update, please do so soon, i would really appreciate it. (shifts hands around behind back) and i won't even threaten with you-know-what this time!
person kinky lurker
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(grrr) it cut off the damn review...

anyways, this was really really really good. i love this story and all of it's hotness. you have a way with bishies, ne? all that hot solo action is enough to keep a girl interested and the action behind them too. i can't wait to see who's doing the seducing... so... who's going to top? i can't wait for the hot fucking that's going to be going on between the two of them. two intense, gorgeous bishies going at it like rabbits in heat... (drool) i love it! i love it! you know? you know that thought! (giggles) more! more!

till next time... did i mention i love you?

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the email.....and now.....if you'll excuse me.............I COULD USE A VERY VERY VEEEERRRRYYYY COLD SHOWER.....THERE MAY NOT HAVE BEEN ANY ACTION WITH THEM BOTH YET....BU-UT....DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN THAT WAS JUST SO FUCKING HOT.....PLEASE EMAIL ME AGAIN IF YOU STILL HAVE MY EMAIL......


I FUCKING LOVE THIS FIC......