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Way to go YoukaiObsessed! I fell in love with this chapter. The whole time I was reading it I was jumping up and down in my computer chair! Normally I would have given you five thumbs up but since there was no lemon you get four. sorry... j/k You SO get five huge thumbs way up! It's a mystery how you did so well, what's your secret??? lol Can't wait until chapter six, argh, you've got me too excited! My ultimate fave part in this chapter is when Sessh is all like, "Are you trying to seduce me, Sephiroth" and so on... But like that was so evil of you to end it there, right when my blood started pumping in all the right places. Tease! >:p *sigh* you're still #1 in my book anyday!

hugs n kissez
~daiyumi~

Oh...a cliffy! And I was really looking forward to some nice boi/boi sex too! Oh well. I supose I can wait. After all you write well enough to keep someone interested in more than just......you know. Anyway, great update. I've never like crossover fics, but this one is very well done. Also, I'm very excited to find out whose gonna be the uke. To be honest I like Sesshy as uke best, but if you write sex scenes as well as battle scenes I'm sure it'll be good either way.

-TOT

How I love this story! I've hooked these guys up in my mind so many times...It's sweet to be able to read it too, maybe too sweet *evil smile* Long live uke Sephiroth!

How DARE you leave off there! *glowers vehemently* just when i'm all geared up to see who ends up dominating who! this is the hottest and most original pairing i've seen in forever and you handle it and keep both in character so well. i can't wait for the freakiness in the next chapter.

(wipes away sweat) wow... that's all i've got to say about this chapter. wow... (mind wanders away to hentai land...)

youkai, that chapter was fantastic. i love it. and let me tell you, you hit one of my two favorite things with the blood... (drools) wow... this chapter was fucking awesome... i don't know what to say about it. i'm going to have to... sleep... on it and then i'll be able to tell you what i think about it...

all you need to know, it's fucking awesome and i love it. (hits back butten to reread chapter 5)

i love this and you!
~hanyou-elf

That is a helluva fitness center. Who would stand up Sesshomaru? Well, I guess in a place like that, I would, LOL! Even as a Mary Sue, he'd whomp me. Wow, did that guy pick a bad fight. Great attention to detail. Sephiroth was the first badguy I had the hots for. Paired with my current badboy obsession... mmm....

~Xak

Wow, Sephiroth's a pervert, lol. Of course, it was definitnely amusing, and I like how you made Sesshomaru the straight man in this (er, not straight as in opposite of gay... hopefully you know what I meant) and the butt of the jokes -apologizes for the pun, but smirks anyway-. That was some serious fighting there. Poor manager, having to get in the middle of THAT fight! Not something I'd want to do!!

~Xak

Man, Sephiroth is a cocky bastard. Of course, it's no surprise he's hot for Sesshomaru. Vocal, too, apparently. I think Sesshomaru's reactions to his solo were amusing. And eww, he shook his hand without cleaning his own completely first. How rude. Sesshomaru seems to have made a rather successful life for himself. I think it's funny that they parked next to each other, too.

rofl@the M&M candy note about your flamer-boy.

~Xak

Mmm, Sesshy solo. To be a fly on his wall... I'm crying dirty pool on Sephiroth, though. Dirty hand, eek. As I mentioned before, you certainly have an attention to detail in this story. I'd hate to be in Sephiroth's car when he was driving, yikes. He's a bit of an ass. And all his wanting to take Sesshy makes me hope HE takes it up the ass, LOL. They seem to be getting along rather well. But not well enough yet. Come on, enough soloing, boys, you have some nice, ripe bishie-flesh waiting to be savaged. Ride that pony... or doggie >:D

~Xak

I love this story! Please update soon :)