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Will you please update this. You're killing me. If you don't, I'm going to stab you with Sephiroth's sword! LOL :)

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cant wait for the next chapter^^

Oh GOD....Ths is sooo fucking HOT. What I wouldn't give to be in the middle of those two..(drools). How much better can it get? I mean, here you have the two most perfect males in all the universe (getting excited just thinking about the possibilities).....Right now, I am definitly jealous of Sesshy.

Anyway, enough of the dirty thoughts. This story is really well written. The sword fighting scene was nicely done and just graphic enough to give a good visual, but not so much as to be revolting. Keep up the good work. I hope you update soon...I really want to read the rest of this. I can't wait 'til Sesshy gets his.

DDDAAAAAAAMN!!!!!!give it to him Seph! lol any ways! good story. never woulda thought of this pairing.

YAY loved the new chapter, sorry it took so damned long for me to read it all though....been kinda busy, please update soon, and keep up the emails reminding me if you have......that's usually the only way I remember to check.

THanks

Elizabeth

Well now, I decided to check out one of your stories and look what I found. Naughty, naughty, YoukaiObsessed! A very well written piece of hentai goodness. I will admit that I was a little... unsure if I would like this... version of my favorite taiyoukai, but you have managed to make this... situation very hot indeed. I am highly impressed, AND looking forward to your next update.

How could you stop it there??? YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!! Sephiroth is so fuckin hot, as well as Sesshomaru I mean I could picture the scene so it shows that I'm a pervert at heart lol. I guess thats why I have alot of guy friends. I guess its not everyday that you find a perverted girl..but um anywayz please update soon!!! PLEASE!!

Ohhh! This is stuff is pretty damn rockamolio! You have quite a flair for writing. Mucho kudos, you're very talented, interesting writer. The ship is pretty groovy too *drools* Rock on!

Great chapter. I'm really excited to find out who gets to be on top. Though this is probably sounding pretty repetitive by now, you are a great writer. I enjoy reading your fics not just for the yaoi stuff (though its very nice ;D) but for the other elements you add to your stories. You make everything flow and fit together very well.

-TOT

wow... that's all i can really think of now. it was incredibly hot and incredibly sexy and i had to change my panties afterwards. (glad i wore panties today)

first, i would like to say, his nipple! i am shocked. and incredibly approving. (c'mere, let me play with the nipple ring... *drool*) oohs... now what is sephy going to use that tongue ring for? i can't wait! (c'mere, let me play with that tongue ring... *melts*)

okay, before i become a blob of hentai, let me say that it was another great chapter. i like the way you've written this story. it's exciting because it's happening as you read it, not in the past. and the pace is bloody brilliant. it's a great story. i look forward to the next chapter and what sephy does to sesshy...

btw, who's dominant in this story? i can't figure it out... ;)
~hanyou-elf