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for Seduction of Swords

by YoukaiObsessed

person Sephiroth\'s sword
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was worth the wait! I feel the need to touch myself now. I always do after reading this story. Baby, you make me hot.
I would love to stab you with my sword. (Wink ^~)
person V
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE THE 8 TH CHAPTER PLEZ this a dam SEXY story and i would really like to know what happens next so write it real soon PLEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person V
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story i really hope you come out with the next chapter soon
person kiotana
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finaly! that was a great chapter! i love the begging and teasing! more!
oh and i would defenitly nominate you for best yaoi lemons^^ love you^0^
person Sola
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update, Sooooonnnnnnnnnn
person Eye of Ra
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.. you updated! .. you said you were going to.. but didn't tell me WHEN! *whines a little* but i LOVED your chapter mah sexilicious one.

*singing Poison's Talk Dirty To Me.. said song heard in background* and baby... Talk dirty to me.....
well. seeing as you are NOT on... i'll probably be off to bed soon. today was worse than the stairs incident. but seriously.. your update was a good pick-me-up. ^^ now to fall asleep to the wondrous sounds of Poison. hehehe... Sweet Dreams mah youkai... tainted one.
Ra
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Believe it or not, I've checked every other day for an update on this story! Oh it was soooo worth it! That was totally hot! Maybe I should get a tongue ring? Hmmm... I think I'm to old, but it sure is tempting. haha! Good luck on your nominations. You deserve them and more. This is one sexy as hell yaoi fic. I can't wait to see what they are going to do about Sephiroth's new erection! I'm sure it will be another highly erotic addition to this tale. By the way, thanks for the great review on ADGL! 'Til next time~

Rinseternalsoul
person kinky lurker
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well... (fanning self) let me tell you that this is fucking hot as hell! i can not believe how fucking hot this is! ohs... to have a silver haired bishie with a gold stud in his mouth to suck my so-not-there cock... hanyou is super jealous of sesshoumaru... (waving hand in front of face, fanning self)

let me just say, congratulations. this story was fucking hot! i can use it to stay warm in the freezing temperatures i'm getting now. yay!

now... onto the review. this is a great chapter. you've captured the mood and i loved the smut and let me say, when sesshy tucked sephy's hair behind his ear, i went, "aww! how cute!" this is a great story and i look forward to more from you! keep it up! i love this story. you're are awesome!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf... who is now off to find somebody with a tongue-ring that wants to give hanyou a ride... <.<
person bluedragonstarheart
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You finally had time to get another chapter up! Your bro being a comp hog again no doubt? Oh well, that's what bro are for, please keep the chapters rolling! This was awesome! Oh well, I have to go finish off two gallons of ice cream and play video games till monday morning.....yeah weird...but oh well later~~
-bluedragonstarheart- P.S. Read Breeding Rights, you'll like it! I know I did!
person Tainted Dreams
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhs I am reviewing my own story. Ack!! Which sword of his, are you going to stab me with? If its that 10 inch one, stab me... please!! *Shifty eyes*

Since I am way behind on updating, I will put this here. I do have part of the chapter wrote. I will try and update this soon!