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for Tease Me, Taste Me, Take Me

by AJs

person Hello Betty
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The "he" which Kagome referred to and the "mate" which Inuyasha had "killed", are they referring to each other unknowingly??? Its just a guess, maybe they had somehow met before or maybe I could be wrong. Or in all honesty, maybe because it feels awkard for Inu to have a mate before kagome came onto the scene just happen to like it better if Kags was the first girl Inu ever fell in love with.But your the author so you decide.
p.s. this story is fantastic, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person fallenangel7583
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot for updates!!! YAY!!! loved it! very well done. the characters are beleiveable and the plot is still very interesting! i am curious as to who hurt Kagome in a prior relationship and just how inu could have thought himself in love if he is merely a senior in highschool now. no offense to highschoolers (i was one at a point) but a lot think they are in love when the truth behind the word is jaded. but he killed her? eep? ::shiver:: wow. that's ...some serious skeletons in the closet. very well done!!! keep it up, i can't wait to read the next update. and that's right, you use those flames to toast marshmellows! don't take that shit!!!!
person Ebony
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. Keep write'n girl. And if you ever need help you no where to find me.
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! ANGST!
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens in their game of pool...in your original version, it for sure got Inu, Kag, Miroku, and Sango a bit ... kinky, no? And I also can't wait to see what Rin has in store for Shippo.
I was quite moved by Hiten and Sango's 'lil conversation at the beginning of the chapter. You certainly know how to draw in a reader. I also loved Shippo and Rin's "best friend" conversations...I LOVE Rin's character in this fic.
Well...until next,

Keep up the great work!!!!!

~Claire ^_~
person Suketchi
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find the whole jelousey issue absoluelty halarious. I'm refurring to the bitchers who keep saying you're story needs to move down of course. MANY writers get VERY jelouse when their own fanfictions go unnoticed, and by 'attacking' a few of the very well written first ones on the list, they hope to discourage you. I smile and chuckle at the same time at their stupidity...and my dears, it's NOT that hard to scroll down. Ignore the story if it is stuck at the top due to editing and has not been updated. Simple as that. As for this fic, in my opinion you're very talented and I enjoyed it. Again, ignore the insolence of name calling, bitching and of course the occasional insult. Once you've mastered that, you will be unstoppable. Congradulations on all the reviews and I hope to read more.

~Suketchi
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyy there.
I didn't get to review the original Tease me, Taste Me, Take Me but this is a definite improvement from it. I love this version. It's so much more then what you had before...the length, the plot, all the factors of a very well written fic. Keep it up!!!!
I can't wait for next chapter,

Until then,

~Claire ^_~
person Kari
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, i'm so glad that u updated, i can't wait to read more, i hope u update soon!
person kiiru
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Update! : ) I know Kagome's day is about to go from bad to worse and Shippo's nowhere near breaking up with Souten... And What about Kagome's past? She made it sound as if she'd fallen for a playboy before... I wonder who... What if that someone showed up... Hmm... As many different plots as I could come up with... You write them best so like I said before, Please update.
person Bibsta
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. all i have to say is wow... that is such a great story!!!!!!!! I love it! Update soon! I really want to see Kagome reject Inuyasha again! xD Keep up the great work! 100000000000000000000/10