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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o yeah lol also thank you for telling me u updated cause lol i didnt know anywho please tell me again when you update please
and thankies BK
and thankies BK
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PERFECT AS USUAL i loved it when your next chapter comes remember to e-mail me about it thanks bye
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you've taken a done idea which a completely dfferent approach, most ppl start off with inu/kag not knowing each other and then faling but the fact that the both already grudgingly like each other is different. Also the new thing with inu having a previous mate and kikyo is in the picture somewhere else is also new and different. We see hiten gay and in love with shippo and vice versa something i've never seen before at all. Good work with the different approach to a highschool AU!!
-Gyousei
-Gyousei
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Loved the chapter! Though I hated where it ended, it was wonderful! Suspense...*lol* Take your time with the next chapter. I'll always be here to read it! ^_^ Keep up the good work! L8ER!!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww thats so cute... For a second there I thought Rin liked Shippo too... One word: competition. And did Inuyasha KILL Kikyo? I know he'd be doing the world a favor but to actually kill her? Wow I wonder where this is going... Anyway Update soon.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, I can't stand cliffhangers!!!! I really liked the pool hall scene with Inuyasha and Kagome. But, now I have sooo many questions about the characters. Please answer some of them soon!!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Shippou and Hiten are such a great couple! I have never thought of them together before but I think it works really well! YOu have spiked my curiosity on the matter of this pool game. Update soon and keep up the great work! 1000000000000000/10
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay first off, great chapter…you devil you sneaking all that stuff in! I love it though; it makes me eager to read it to see all the little surprises you leave for me! I think you are incredibly talented and I love reading everything you write. It is not surprising to me at all that you are being nominated for multiple awards from the Fanguild! Did you hear that everyone??!!!?? This is a great author here. It is my honor to help you in any way that I can! Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me, you are too sweet. I appreciate you letting me help! I am lucky to have such a talented, thoughtful friend like you.
As for you anonymous, you have some nerve! This is HER story, not yours, so before you open your big fat mouth, you need to think about that (you should also consult a dictionary for all your spelling errors). You should be HAPPY she shares it with us all. You must be one of those people that doesn’t think about what they say or write before you write it because, what you are talking about Scented has no control over. Sounds to me like your real problem is with AFF.net. So go run your big fat mouth off at them and do us all a favor and thank Scented for even taking the time to write this for us! Scented has every right to edit her stories without having to explain it to you! She is trying to make it better for HER GREATFUL READERS! What are you like a little sissy baby throwing a temper tantrum because she has a life and you DON’T? Please, grow up and stop wasting her time! She could be spending her time writing for the readers who DO appreciate her, but no YOU ruined that!
As for you anonymous, you have some nerve! This is HER story, not yours, so before you open your big fat mouth, you need to think about that (you should also consult a dictionary for all your spelling errors). You should be HAPPY she shares it with us all. You must be one of those people that doesn’t think about what they say or write before you write it because, what you are talking about Scented has no control over. Sounds to me like your real problem is with AFF.net. So go run your big fat mouth off at them and do us all a favor and thank Scented for even taking the time to write this for us! Scented has every right to edit her stories without having to explain it to you! She is trying to make it better for HER GREATFUL READERS! What are you like a little sissy baby throwing a temper tantrum because she has a life and you DON’T? Please, grow up and stop wasting her time! She could be spending her time writing for the readers who DO appreciate her, but no YOU ruined that!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Execellent chapter and that was mean of you. Getting my hopes up to finally have Sesshy-sama. T-T, I was so excited T-T. I can wait. Sorry to hear about your health, hope ya get better soon. Please do, this story must go on!!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AIEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU STOP THE STORY RIGHT HERE!!!!!!!!! EVIL CLIFFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! WERE NOT GONNA THROW TOMATOES AT YOU SILLY... (SMILES A BIT SCARILY...) WERE THROWING SOMETHING MUCH MUCH WORSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LIKE DOG DUNG OR CAT BARF OR ROTTEN EGGS OR!!!!!!!!!!!!...- OH SORRY... GOT A BIT CARRIED AWAY... (SOBS UNCONTROLABLY...) HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DONT CONTINUE IT RIGHT NOW, ILL KIDNAP YOU AND TIE YOU TO A CHAIR IN FRONT OF A COMPUTER AND HOLD A HOOK TO YOU WHILE YOU TYPE AND ILL!!!!!...- (BEING CARRIED AWAY BY 'SPECIAL' DOCTORS AND ASKING IF THEY HAVE COMPUTERS IN PRISON...)