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for Tease Me, Taste Me, Take Me

by AJs

person mel
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loven this fic!!! must update again soon. must know what happens next. so please dont take forever to post the next chapter.
person Anonymous
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been finding this story rather good. It is quite the let down, however, when every time it pops up near the top of the list, it is not because it was updated, but only to attempt to get more and more reviews. It would be much more satisfying to actually post a chapter instead of continually trying to see how many reviews you can get. It probably help to get more reviews, better ones, and make your readers happy to actually read what you are supposedly writing.
person CHIBIchibi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU ANON!!! You have some nerve, critisizing Scented's work. Hmph, have you actually read this fic.... hmmmmmm? No.... that's what I thought. I read your review and you said you left FF.net to come here, well I have something to say to you, GO BACK TO FF.NET and take your shit with you. Scented does NOT have to put up with your shit and I love this fic, maybe if you'd read it, you'd love it to, but nooooooooooooo you just had to go and be whiny and bitchy about it, well go fuck off! *HUFF* Sorry Scented, but I hate reviews like that and I just have to tell you, I loved chapter 4, I can't wait until I read chapter 5. WHOO HOOO Oh and one more thing ANON, you're such a coward. leave your email address, pussy!!!!
person DaddysLittleGirl
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, it was sexy, I can't wait until you update again and I hope it's soon, I'm anxious as to where Rin is taking Shippou, but knowing you, you'll probably end up surprising me and well.... please update soon. I need to know what's gonna happen next
person XYZ
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Joy! You updated, so I have to admit that was lot faster than I expected. Ah, too many unsolved mysterious. Who is 'him' that Kagome keeps thinking off? Kouga? Hojo? Or some other nameless person? And also, where is Rin dragging poor Shippo off to? And the woman Inuyasha is thinking about is Kikyou, right? Great chapter, I like the fact that the sotyr is moving along the perfect pace to keep the suspension and drama at just the right level, enough to intrigue, but not to overwhelm. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sad. This is the 3rd high school fic i came across in 2 pages. I'm doing the world a favor and flaming them all. I left FF.net because of the young writers only to find the same trash here. It's hard to believe an adult would write about high school. Do the world a favor and delete this shit. This is an adult site dammit. Write like one
person jem
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... this chapter was very interesting! I thought it was great the way Inuyasha was haing an inner conflict with his human and demon side.. I thought it was brilliant. UPDATE SOON!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack, you did it again!!! I want more, why why, why? UPdate! I need it, pleas,e please, please. You make me lean into it and then... you stop. PLease update soon!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't rush your writing no matter what people say.. the longer you take to write and ensure a good chapter.. the better it will be. And I understand the whole work thing.. it sucks.. ugh. I loved the whole exchange between Inu Yasha and Kagome, it was really interesting and amazing at the same time. So he had a previous mate, hm? And so Shippo DOES love Hiten.. too bad for Souten, but she should get over it... she seems kind of demanding if he gave her a pair of his house keys just to shut her up. And I'm curious as to what Rin is going to show Shippo... So please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
person KuroK(aka BK)
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you feel better and this story is just getting better and better and god i wanna know who inuyasha was with and killed... was it kikyo naaaaaaaa couldnt be because shes with kagura right well anyway as long as they (meaning inuyasha and kagome, miroku and sango, shippo and hitan i guess) end up together ^_^
PLEASE update when you feel better ^_^
take care of yourself
BK