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for Tease Me, Taste Me, Take Me

by AJs

person EvilKittenn (not signed in)
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright... I just stumbled on your story and may I say.... IT FUCKING ROCKS!!!!!! *grins and breaths in deep breaths* I love the characters and how rich you make them and god only knows what kind of lemons will be in the future. *looks around* I am very happy that you decided to re-post it, for I did not get to read it the first time. And about Inu's ears... can we share?? *puppy dog eyes* PWEESE???? Lol... keep it going and I can't wait to see what happens next. Again, I love it and I love the fact that you rip into people that are stupid. *Holds up fist* POWER TO THE AUTHORS AND CHEWING PEOPLE OUT!! *Smiles* Ok, yeah... more please....

Terra aka EvilKittenn
person InuGrrrl
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first off i LOVE H.S. fics, I think they're SO fun.
Two, I love the way you describe my Inu & kag's lil'
"Relationship." I'm confused about the Sesshy/Bank/Jak/
Inu thing...it was like reading a zillion riddles, buy i'm
gonna trust that you will clear things up in future eps.
I like how you gave everyone their own POVs and dialogue
(I write the same way). I hope to see a mindblowing lemon
for my fave couple soon & learn the mystery illness of Shippo
and who Inu & Kags are secretly agonizing over...why do i
keep feeling that it's eachother?! Is there sumthin' ya wanna
tell me?! ^_^
person FoxFireDemoness
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I actually was on vacation and just came back and I am soooo happy that you have, not one, but two chapters posted. I love you, chapter 4 was beautiful, but chapter 5 was... delicious!!! Please update soon!
person fallenangel7583
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm....i'm so confused! LOL. i don't know but i was lost during the jakotsu/bankotsu/sesshoumaru interaction. first, let me say, i got chills thinking of Sesshoumaru as a stripper. very, very interesting!!! and shippo's dying? oh no! poor kid! i got that jakotsu loves inu (as always) but what he had to do with inu's ex lover that begins with a K...well...i was lost. the only canon character i can think of besides for Kikyo with a k is karron (the panther youkai). hmm...interesting. a lot of good miroku and sango interaction and i'm left hanging waiting to see what happens with inu adn kag. man does inu have a temper! damn. sucks to be anyone in the room when hell breaks loose wiht the truth of this chick of his! damn! good story, keep it up!
person fallenangel7583
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think i got slammed by anon as well, and my response is very similar to yours; if they don't like the story, hit the tiny little X at the top of the screen. if you wish to be an adult, then lets act like one starting with common mannerisms 101. you know, people like that piss me off. they want to talk big and bad and like, 'oh i'm an adult, how dare you speak of highschool', but you want to know what, i'm five years out of it but it makes for a great breeding ground for a story basis. oh well...to each asshole their own, ne? keep up the good work and don't let fuck heads like this cock sucker get you down; your story rocks!
person SadisticxWh0r3
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! I just love this fic. It's really awesome and I love the plot. I am actually really suprised that I even read this, just because it dealt with Inuyasha and Kagome. ((I'm more of the yaoi freak)) But this is one of the better Inuyasha/Kagome AU fics that I have read. I'm very suprised and very happy that I am reading this. You've done so far an awesome job. I can not wait for more, and I am very excited to read the next chapters. Welps, later.
person vtchachi
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have really out done yourself with this chapter! Your writing is getting more expressive with each chapter you write.
I am really enjoying the Bank/Jak dynamics and look forward to what is to come with them. I am of course dying to know
who this K is that is Inuyasha's "old lover." And Shippou, poor Shippou, what is going on with him?
Thanks so much for your kind words, but you know you are the greatest. I merely look for spelling errors and surface mistakes.
You are definitely the creative genius, but I am glad that I am able to help! Sorry I went on vacation and I apologize to all your fans
for keeping this great chapter away from them, but boy I needed it and it went by too fast!
Thanks for sharing this fic with us and don't worry about those jerks, they obviously do not have enough brain activity to make proper
judgments any how!
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!


Worth it. So worth it.
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'tis I, Myztik Shadows, with a new name ... but anyway, I loved this chapter!!!! Although there was a bit of a glitch. There was a double posting of when Hiten talks to Sesshomaru and Sango gets nauseous on the motorcycle. (It appeared twice on the page). Other than that, this was a wonderful chapter! You outdid yourself with this one. Well done! I really can't wait for the next chapter. I seriously can't find words to say how much I love this fic! It's absolutely tremendous.
Keep up the awesome work! (But I know you will!!!!)

~Claire
person tdacallie
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how did i manage to miss this awesome fic. You totally rock! Please update soon.