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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I can't wait to see what happens, though at some of the points of the story it was a little hard to figure out who was talking. Will Kagura end with Sesshoumaru now that she's broken up with Miroku? And more Inu/Kag action, please. Update soon!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the whole chapter,
I thought it was great and sensual,
please update soon, I hated the way you ended it
I thought it was great and sensual,
please update soon, I hated the way you ended it
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rwad it over again and boy are there a lot of things
I loved, it was sexy and sensual, as I'vr said in my last review,
but wow... the character developement is outstanding,
the betrayal, the passion, the temptation, it's all coming forth
and I can't wait to see what happens next, I loved the scene with
Hiten and Shippo, although I can say I would've never paired those
two together, so yes it's an interesting and fascinating twist,
I'm on the edge of my seat now, I can't wait to find out what happens
next. Please, please, please update soon. I'll love you forever.
I loved, it was sexy and sensual, as I'vr said in my last review,
but wow... the character developement is outstanding,
the betrayal, the passion, the temptation, it's all coming forth
and I can't wait to see what happens next, I loved the scene with
Hiten and Shippo, although I can say I would've never paired those
two together, so yes it's an interesting and fascinating twist,
I'm on the edge of my seat now, I can't wait to find out what happens
next. Please, please, please update soon. I'll love you forever.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And I hope you keep writing it. Don't let what some might say about your story get in the way of writing a great story. Your doing a great job, keep it up.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the new take on the storyline this time 'round.
Please update soon, I am very curious as to where you will take things and exactly what Kagome will do about her situation with Yasha. Besides the obvious that is. ;)
Please update soon, I am very curious as to where you will take things and exactly what Kagome will do about her situation with Yasha. Besides the obvious that is. ;)
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best I've read, keep it up!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was a great chapter. I can't wait for you to update. I'm mostly interested into the Inu/Kag thing but San/Miro is interesting too. I like the detail, as always, and think that this story is quickly taking form. I hope you update soon. EK!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter, as usual! please update soon!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Liked how Hiten came in and caught Shippou and they shared that incredible moment together.
Love the anguish and I can't wait to see what is going to happen between everyone!! What is Inuyasha doing there?
ooooooo, you got me hanging again...boy you are good at that...you cheeky monkey!
Love the anguish and I can't wait to see what is going to happen between everyone!! What is Inuyasha doing there?
ooooooo, you got me hanging again...boy you are good at that...you cheeky monkey!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EAKKKKKKKKKKK! I loved that chapie! so juicy and sexy! Plus who cannot looove a bad boy inu? Are Kikyou and Kaugra going to plot revenge fro their broken hearts? and if so on who... da na naaaa! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!