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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great unique story.....and iI lke your writing style
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story and u should update soon please!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting storyline but you need a beta reader. There are a lot of grammar, punctuation and even phrase errors. You kept saying niether the less, I believe, when the actual phrase is never the less. It's things like that, that make it difficult to read your story which is disappointing because it looked really interesting.
I suggest you join the Adultfanfiction Beta Readers group, you can find the link above. You can easily find a beta there that would suit your needs and help you improve your story.
I suggest you join the Adultfanfiction Beta Readers group, you can find the link above. You can easily find a beta there that would suit your needs and help you improve your story.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i so glad that u bac forsur i thought u fogot all about it
anyway update real soon!!
anyway update real soon!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO DONT GIVE A PREVIEW IT WILL MAKE ME MORE IMPATIENT
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better put the next chapter up soon! Well you can take your time actually...I'll be nice
Sorry about the other day....i was at school and the teacher caught me on msn..>-< so i got kicked off.
But yea I love this story so far so keep the chapter coming.
Lia
Sorry about the other day....i was at school and the teacher caught me on msn..>-< so i got kicked off.
But yea I love this story so far so keep the chapter coming.
Lia
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story intresting Red fox twist but i dont get wat the humans did 2 betray her
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. *sheepishly* I was wondering when you would possible update this story. I hiappened to stumble upon it while searching for a good Ses/Kag story and I've taking a liking to it. I just hope that you haven't abandoned it. It has potential.
-RixGrl
-RixGrl