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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

DAT WUZ SOOOO EVIL!!.......I LYKE IT!! ;] i nevah would've thought dis story would end up lyke dis lol i would've thought sumthin lyke..."oh wellz i bet whoevr da man she's raping iz gonna turn da tables on her" but i wuz so wrong xD nice story brought meeh in tears ov happiness LOL!!

This kind of story isn't usually my style, but damn did it make me horny. Read you other rewiev and had to disagree. It's all just fantasy, right? I don't usually condone rape (which is basically what it was) and certainly not killing people, but in the setting of Hell I think it works. Would be really wierd if the ruler of hell suddenly started wearing pink and blushing and pleading with guys to be gentle... or letting the other party have control.
Uhm, the formatting wasn't all that great though. Could use a little work, you know, dividing into paragraphs and stuff. Oh, and I didn't really get how her clothes looked from the description..
Keep up the good work!
/Zmy

Kagome is to mean. its a great idea with her being queen of the underworld and shes got all these sex slaves but you didnt give us who she was fucking and thats inportant because i could not get a picture of the guy at all and i relly thank you should have used one of the inuyasha guys however the guy you described did sound like Kouga or Naraku but still it wasnt nown i think if you go back make kagome a little nicer use Inuyasha, Miroku, Kouga, Naraku, or Sesshoumaru as the guy make him less submisive (like have him turn the tables on her like have him through her aginst the wall and fuck her brains out) i beleave if you take my ideas to heart you would get more reviews and more people reading this story.