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by Sesshysfavhuman

person michiko-sama
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love Inu/Kog realationships! I hope you get more up asap! And this is expically good b/c you have, like 3 other realationships going on at the same time. You also have the Rin as a miko thing and the Naraku coming back and the think with Kagome. I love pwop (Porn without Plot), but I like pwp (Porn with Plot) even better!
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I highly enjoyed reading all 10 chapters of your story. Please keep up the good writing and update the next chapter as soon as possible.
person shylust
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You already know how much I love this story..but it don't hurt to say it again ;) lol Excelently done.

Laura
person Hiro
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I wud never think about a Kouga/InuYasha pairings but its great. Keep up the good work. Plz update ASAP
person maria
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 bad, shinjo waz a nice guy. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person liana
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You still have the astericks in!
person DraconWolf88
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BI-PRIDE, YO! lol Vn_nV
person joy
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how dare u lave me there!!!! arggggggh lol nice job
person inumoon3
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sango...well update soon! I wanna know what's going to happen next!
person sweetsatincocoa
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm probably the 17 millionth person that has said this, but *sucks in a deep breath*....


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!KAGOME IS SUCH A WHINY SKINNY BITCH ASS WHORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whew. I feel a tad better. Let her stay with Naraku, her "love" and make him give her some sort of untreatable terminal demon herpes or something. On her face. Yeah. So when people look at her, they go EW NARAKU GAVE YOU FACE HERPES!!! I thought it was awesome when Sango beat up that ugly wolf woman thingie. That goes to show God doesn't like ugly, even in fiction. Kouga and Yasha are hotties always, and so sweet together! Miroku...he needs to go somewhere and pray. Can't wait for the next ass kicking chapter!!!