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Maybe Risa or Usagi for the girl, Ryusuke or Hiroshi for one of the boys! This chapter was really good, about time you updated! Well update soon!!!!

great chpater. loved it, but there's onething. There are a lot of spelling and gammatical mistakes and even the words are wrong in some place. if your beta has checked the chapter, i don't think she had done a very good job. you should ask her/him to check this chapter again. don't mind but i hate to see such a nice chapter ruined by so many mistakes. So next time before you post tell your beta to check the chapter nicely or ask for another betas help.

AND THIS IS NOT A FLAME. I would never do that. i love your stories. it's just the misakes i hate to see a good chapter posted with so many mistakes in them.

hope you understand what i am trying to say.

SHINJO CAN'T CARRY PUPS!!! HOW UNFAIR!!!! Oh.... AND I LUV THIS FIC!!!!

this was a great chapter!!! i love how you put sesshoumaru and shinjo together, they are HOT together...i love the sex scenes in this chapter and the scene during dinner was funny... i would've been like kouga and inuyasha and start laughing. i don't know any names for the pups, but i recommend looking in any manga books that you have that are not popular here or give them names that mean sometime in japanese...update when you can

Those were reall great chapter and you did show the Sango and shinjo's separation pretty well. poor shinjo i feel so soory for him. hope he finds peace in sesshy, is he gonna get pregnant too? Now that eould be something, ne?

*sniffles* Just what I needed to get my day started...
What can I say... cute, beautiful, hot, just perfect...!!
*blows nose a bit and goes of to fetch herself another cup of coffee*

yaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... good job.. loved how long the chapter was ty i love u

Oh my... that's so very...interesting and hot

awww so cute...we need a sess lemon now!!!!!

Good work explaining Sesshoumaru's thoughts! It was a great chapter, update soon!