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by Sesshysfavhuman

schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It took me couple of days but I finally finished. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It actually took me a few days to read this story. You can seriously consider publishing this fiction into a book. If you do, I’ll gladly get a copy of it but with your signature too :)

Normally, I would not be bother with pairings other than Sesshoumaru & Inuyasha. However, after reading your story, I have a change in heart. I honestly like Kouga & Inuyasha because they are just so cute & naughty when put together in your fiction.

At the back of my mind, Miroku & Sango were always a couple to me till Shinjo came into the story. When I really thought that Shinjo & Sango may make a good pair, Sesshoumaru came in & pair off with Shinjo. In fact, I actually worried for them if they are making the right decisions.

Gosh, I can truly sense the emotion they undergo, their joy & pain, love & hate. My feeling is totally at the mercy of your writing. What a splendid piece of work!!!

I was happily reading from one chapter to another when I came to chapter 13, your author notes. I was shocked! I’m really sorry to hear about your miscarriage. Please have plenty & plenty of rest. I, together with the rest of your supportive readers, will wait patiently for your return. Till then, take care!
person kogaXinu
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm...a name for the baby boy with blue eyes should be Ai means love and maby for the girl maby it should be Miyu ur choiceXD get well im in love with da story T.T pleaz hurry
person tsukiyomi
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, although I was extremely disapointed when Sesshoumaru got together with Shinjo. I realy wanted Sango to get him. It seemed like Miroku and her were falling away from each other. But I guess Sesshoumaru and Shinjo are t3e sexay together. Either way, I like your writing. Keep em coming...
person Mollie (GreatCheezyPoofGirl)
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm terribly sorry to hear about your miscarriage, and i hope your lung is doing better. just thought i'd give you my condolences.
feel better soon!
your fan (one of many, i assure you),
Mollie
person who me?
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! inu's going to be pregnant again! i love all your stories and im terribly sorry that those things had to happen to you. my aunt's had two miscarriges and a still-born. she obviousely isn't meant to have children. i hope you get better, and no rush on an update, take your time and don't stress yourself.
person Forgotten sunrise
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the miscarriage, but I'm glad you're doing better.You do have a wonderful story going on and its nice to see things haven't/aren't going the smoothest they can go and that things are utterly horrible.For the pup's names... Kiyomi is a nice one for a girl. It's my friends' middle name.As for the boys' names, I cant really help you right now. Maybe a name will just hit me. ^-^;
Good luck.
person Fan1
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is one of the best fan fics I have ever read. After reading a chapter, I couldn't wait to read the next. I would love to see this fic animated, you have some real talent.

I also heard about your accident, I do hope you get better. A clott is a serious thing, so don't push yourself too hard. But don't worry, you'll get better.

Hoping you feel better and looking forward to the next chapter,
Fan1
person megitsune
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im so sorry for your miscarriage. it's a wonderful story. take all the time you need to recover. your readers can wait.

sincerally (sp?)

megitsune
person adanna
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry to hear about your micarriage and the problems you had with your lungs i do hope you get better soon. i would like to tell you that your story bitten is one of the stories that i look forward to and i'm also one of the people who don't review even if the stories good. so i hope you take your time to heal and get better and i'm postive all your fans will say the same