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by Sesshysfavhuman

person kogas hentai luver
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got me so hooked on this. This whole idea of Koga marking Inu by mistake is awesome. I love the way you have Koga and Inu trying to deal with their emotions. It's very angsty and sad. I do hope they get together soon. I'm looking foward to mating season ^_~
person kakji
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh more Kouga / Inuyasha thats my favorite pairing
person mechee
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like your ideal its great keep up the good work. I already read it on FFN so when are you going to up date???
person mechee
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for your first fan fiction please continue I know you will do a good job
person Dante
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like this is going to be a fun story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

D_
person So far, so good
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've started off really good. I'm concerned that you premised the warnings with a PG rating, but it would go up to R. This is an adult website and if you feel that a PG warning is warrented then I'm afraid of how week your R rating will be. And by the way 'which' is not spelled 'witch'.
person yukiko
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm .... I like it. I've started liking the Kouga/Inu yasha pairing lately .... and a bitchy Kagome just had to it *giggle*

I kinda like the plot, so I'll come for more.
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. And I like that Kag is being portrayed as a bitch for once. You go for it!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What will happen next? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Hawthorn
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post the other chapters too. I saw this at FF.net and now really would like to read the uncensored version. :) I also wondered... Will Sesshoumaru and Tenseiga make an appearance or will this become a reincarnation story? Anyway. Please more. :)