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::howls and whistles:: Daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! This is starting out to be a really really good fic! I hope u update it soon. I luv the way everyone thinks Kagome's a bitch, its such a nice change to other fics. Go Sango. I hope Inu and Kouga get along better in the next chapter, stubborn boys!

need .... more .... or .... will ... die ...

That was your first sex scene?! (faints) If you're this good now, you'll probably kill someone when you get more experienced. Keep up the good work.

Another excellent chapter. Sweet, sweet Inu and Koga, really falling for each other. Kag is such a bitch in this fic and she deserves nothing least of all my pity. It was so cute having Inu cradled in Koga's lap sleeping. I just want to squeeze all the sugar out of those two. I think bringing Naraku back in will be fun. I also can't wait for Inu and Koga to figure out that Inu is pregnant. Won't Koga be soooo happy. Now he can have an heir and his puppy too. ^_^

yey! naw, it was a good sex scene!

good, now Kouga just made a emotional Inu yasha worst. Damn, he's an ass sometime.

this is so frikkin good u have to write another chapter and post it when u can.also u spelled naked wrong. just wanted u to know.

It's really nice to see Inuyasha/Kouga story that has some orginality! No offense to all those other authors out there, but writing stories with the same plot over and over again just gets old. I'm not going to even mention the whole 'I hate you, but suddenly I love you, and let's fuck like rabbits!' thing that everyone does. Conflict is the basis of all good stories--something I feel that you have in spades. I can't wait to see what you do with this little problem you've created here...>_<

I like the dynamic you have going on between Inuyasha and Kagome--it's wonderfully complex. (Well, complex enough for me! ^.^) When people make Kagome into a psycho bitch, they tend to make her extremely flat and shallow. Thank you for actually putting some deapth into your characters!

So, anyhey--great job, keep it up, and update soon!~ZH

This looks interesting... I will keep my eyes open for more chapters in the future.
Keep up the good work.

First and foremost i just gotta say that inuyasha and kouga are my fav pairing (besides the incest everyone hopes will happen between him and shessy ^_^) so hurray on you for choosing that pair! Another thing is jus a suggestion and not a flame, try changing the pwp to an a/u (alternate universe cause most pwp stories are mainly oneshots cause they're plot?what plot? Hehe damn i was hoping that Sango would've messed Kagome up at least a bit...lol keep it up Ja'ne!