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by Sesshysfavhuman

schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and i hope you will update it soon.
person Lici
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwhhh! So cute! Puppies and a cute couple, Sessy and a hot guy, Rin and a goos friend in Shippou . . . . And of course preistess bashing.

I think Sen would be a good name for the female pup. It means wood fairy and is pronounced sin . . . .
NAMES:
~E:
Hoshi = star
Kana = powerful

~F:
Sen = wood fairy
Aiko = little loved one
Amarante = flower that never fades
Aneko = older sister
Hitomi = blue eyes
Ichigo = strawberry
Kaida = little dragon
Kita = north

~M:
Akio = bright boy
Aden = little fire
Akuji = dead and awake (Seriously makes me think of vamps)
Alaric = noble ruler
Haru = born in the spring
Haruki = shining brightly
Keiji = lead cautiously
Kin = golden
Makoto = honest, sincere

. . . . Sorry, but I forget a lot of the others. This is the best I could do.
person SP777
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A couple of things..well a few things actually.

First, I hope you're doing well & healing alright.

Second, you making Rin a priestess is something I always thought Rin would wind up being in the manga because I've thought 'Would it be something if Rin just happened to be Kikyo's reincarnation. She would DEFINITELY be more adequate than Kagome.'

Third, I KNEW you were setting up Shinjo for Sesshoumaru, even though I would have loved for Shinjo to be with Sango, I guess you have to keep it somewhat canon, right? Even though the monk hasn't said how he felt in the manga/anime...well he has but he keeps up his lecherous ways. I don't see how the girl takes it.

Get well soon....and nuff' said.
person heather
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much i cant wait till you start writing again so i can find out whats going to happen next.
person nette
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liv this story. so much passion and fire ooooohhhhh just can't get enough. can't wait to find out more of naraku's and kagome's plan and also rin's new found miko powers. good stuff, keep it up
person nette
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liv this story. so much passion and fire ooooohhhhh just can't get enough. can't wait to find out more of naraku's and kagome's plan and also rin's new found miko powers. good stuff, keep it up
person Chella-Chan
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story ROCKS!!! Its sweet and HOT at the same time!! YUm~ I LUVED IT~~~~~~
person Nasuto
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to know why Sesshomaru chose Kouga cousin because if Sesshomaru want to have heir why he chose a male. If you could make that male a somethimg like Inuyasha it would be very good.So take my offer.
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a cool fic although sometimes it seems weird that Kouga and Inuyasha are SO connected that Kouga can feel Inuyasha's pain during the birth, but can feel his weariness afterwards.
person omgitsamonkey!
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet! i am sorry for your health issues but i hope you feel better soon! please update when you get the chance. :D (::) cookie for u!