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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, hope for you to update soon! And I'm guessing Inuyasha's pregnant! Well can't wait till the next update!!!
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please kill off Kagome. I'll give you candy....
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two new chapters - loooong ones as well... You have a very good story going here...
Thank you for sharing..
Thank you for sharing..
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it^_^ Please write more
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story.
I love kouga/inuyasha yaoi fics!
Are you going to finish the story?
I hope so..Please finish it!!
I love kouga/inuyasha yaoi fics!
Are you going to finish the story?
I hope so..Please finish it!!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome! >_< Anyhey, I like how the story is progressing...the love/hate relationship that Kouga and Inuyasha have is yummy! Expecially the lemons...mmmm. Just one suggestion, though--I think you could use a beta reader...someone to proof your stories for grammatical errors, typos, and the like. Even just skimming through your chapters yourself before you post them would do wonders. Don't be offended if it's aff's fault!
Update soon so I don't suffer too much! I'm no good at waiting...~.^
Update soon so I don't suffer too much! I'm no good at waiting...~.^
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that's your first lemon! my! that was so good. i wonder.... what will it when you go pro. yay!!! more and more kagome bashing. three cheers for sango. you rock!!!!!
great chapter loved it loved it and loved it. oh plz plz update soon. i like where its going.
great chapter loved it loved it and loved it. oh plz plz update soon. i like where its going.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay here you go....
i have noticed some spellimg mistakes and grammatical erro in your chapter.
"whine" in mispelt as"wine"
"naked" as "necked" etc etc.
i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer i can sure help. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any you can e-mail me.
anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^
i have noticed some spellimg mistakes and grammatical erro in your chapter.
"whine" in mispelt as"wine"
"naked" as "necked" etc etc.
i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer i can sure help. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any you can e-mail me.
anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
miyu-chan rim557@vsnl.net 2005-03-07 id # 2035174489
okay here you go....
i have noticed some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in your chapter.
"whine" in mispelt as"wine"
"naked" as "necked" etc etc.
i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer let me know. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any help with the spelling ansd dtuff you can e-mail me.
anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^
okay here you go....
i have noticed some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in your chapter.
"whine" in mispelt as"wine"
"naked" as "necked" etc etc.
i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer let me know. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any help with the spelling ansd dtuff you can e-mail me.
anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did an incredible job here. What a hot and steamy lemon. And you kept them in character too. This is truly one of my favorite fics. You rock!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.