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This was an awsome chapter i hope sess makes it in time to save inu. cant wait for the next chapter this is such a good story

Ok there are a few mistakes in the chapter I would like to point out

1. “the monk just blank” okay…. I didn’t understand the meaning of this. It is either “the monk went blank” or “the monk just blinked”

2. a few comma and question marks are messed up. Even inverted comma signs are a bit messed up.

3. “echos” should be spelts as “echoes”

4. “you’re” is mispelt as “your”

5. “Tenseiga” s mispelt “Tensegia”

Anyway although these mistakes are minor they destroy the beauty of the chapter. Plz don’t think I am being rude, just tell your beta to check it out. Anyway the chapter was great even if inu-chan and Kouga was not present and I am eagerly looking forward to read the next.

So please please update soon,

Ja ne! ^_^

i love it and i know how evil a computer can be also i hope something horrible happens to kagome if the pup and inuyasha stay dead

Oh veryvery nice ... puting Sess into this is bound to make it interesting please do continue!!

I hope Sess will get to the wolf's den in time and will he save Inu and his pups? And what about Kagome? Everyone will want her dead now, as they should cause she deserves to die!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

Jesus this fic is great. I haven't blinked in so long. Keep it up! Woot!

I want kagome to die.


-schwarzwald

Dude....I will give you the biggest imaginary cookie in the world if you don't kill/harm Sesshoumaru! *big puppy dog eyes*

I was wondering if Sess would have some part in this. I hope he decides to help Inuyasha. update soon please

That was so sad, but very exciting at the same time! I can't wait till you update!!!! I hope Inu-chan and the babies are alright! Well update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!