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by Sesshysfavhuman

person Anon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeee!!!!! THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER!!!! AND LOVE THE RIN IS A MIKO THING! ...altho i'm worried about miroku! :(
person Nijo
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. ^_^ I love how you crafted the story, how the characters develop, the sex scenes. I guess it would be simpler to say I like everything about this story!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting the whole Rin thing...but I found it quite an interesting twist! Keep up the good work!!
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg OMG!!! this chapter is so good, it so so so cute, i just love it. i mean kouga is so cute with all his songs and cutting of his hair? that was brilliant idea. it was so heart warming and touching i need to sit with a box of kleenex. and later that lemon y god that was so steamy and inuyasha is seme too yay!!! a superb chapter....

and 3 pups wow! i hope they'll be born soon!!

you are doing a great job... keep up the good work
person nea
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! What will be the length of inu's pregnancy? Is Rin a miko, or was what she did just a one time thing? Could Kouga become pregnant? It would be hilarious for him to become pregnant after their little session, and also he and inu could share the joys of pregnancy together. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
person Kyra wilson
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is great, love the plot . I like how you made Kagome evil you brought stuff that nobody as far I have seen nobody has. Keep up the good work
it's really cool.
person joy
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was PERFECT!!!! It was so romantic, passionate, cute, sad, funny, enchanting, and heart warming!!! i need a kleenex
plz continue u r excellent.. i liked how u described all the things plz keep up with that
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy and very proud of Sess. He did a great deed! Can't wait to see the ceremony and was Rin a surprise. Who would have thought she was a miko?! Keep the great work!!!
person shylust
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I am anxious to find out what will Naraku and Kagome will do with Inuyasha. This story is getting more and more interesting. Keep up the good work.

Laura
person evilchild
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I don't review much but since you asked so nicely (and I have some time to spare) I'll review. I really like this fic so far. I hate Kagome in it but hey I hate Kagome period! I cannot stand her. So continue to make her the bad guy. She was in the wrong and she doesn't want to admit it. Besides Inuyasha doesn't want a skank whore like her. That skirt is WAY too short to be normal. Any way, I really, really like this fic. The story line is great and there hardly any mistakes. I like the hate/love relationship Kouga and Inuyasha has. I think it's cute. Inuyasha keeps dening he doesn't love Kouga but he knows he can't stay away from his wolfie! I can't wait for the next update!