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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:o ha!!! that sucks so much!! i've never thought about that... poor inu and kog! guh! does it get any more embarrasing? i freakin love this fic! how long do you expect it to be? are you going to make a separate story about rin? a rin/sess or rin/shippo or rin/oc? it'd be cute...
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a great chapter! update when you can!!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. update next chapter soon.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like this chapter. Its sweet, I almost cried for Kouga. I cant believe that even wondered what the heck Sesshomaru was doing there. u.u I feel like such a bad fangirl. T_T; I do hope you finish your story. I can't wait to see how the pups turn out. ^_^Keep up the great work~!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! the problem with male pregnancy fics with me is though I always feel let down when the kids are born...
writing OC's in an established universe always seems like blasphemy to me...
Oh well! I know you'll do it well!
writing OC's in an established universe always seems like blasphemy to me...
Oh well! I know you'll do it well!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fics, such a twist in it. but my favorite sentence in that one is :
I’m going to release,” Inuyasha said quickly between labored breaths. “Release with me.”
it's ...... the first time I've red it so far XD Kinda make me laught in the middle of it ...
I’m going to release,” Inuyasha said quickly between labored breaths. “Release with me.”
it's ...... the first time I've red it so far XD Kinda make me laught in the middle of it ...
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good but I dont think it was as well written as the other chapters, but i still loved it none the less. Um, you quite a few grammar errors in nearly every chapter but nothing a little spell check cant fix. So all in all this is an excellent fic and it keeps me coming back for more, just needs to be tweaked a bit. Anyhoo, keep up the good work.
TaTa
TaTa
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I hope those caves have good insulation, they were loud and Sessy has good hearing. Anyway I love when Sessy saves the day.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG What a stupendous chapter. I can't believe you had Koga cut his hair. But in many cultures cutting one's hair to show their grief is common. I think it was brilliant and insightful of you to incorporate that in Koga's grieving ritual. I love the way you had Sess come in at the last moment to bring Inu back, but with a catch (the arrow still remaining) And I am even more than happy that you had Rin pull the arrow out, thus drawing her into the story line. Keep up the wonderful work ^_^ CYA next time.