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by Sesshysfavhuman

person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I laughed soooooo fucking hard at the beginning of the chapter that my daughter came out to see what that hell was sooooo funny. I had tears in my eyes and was laughing so hard I couldn't even talk. I finally let her read the first part and she damn near died laughing too. You have such a wonderful sense of humor. Bravo to you! I really liked how you explained the ritual, it was really cool. And I loved how Inu's demon side came out to protect his pups, yet Koga was able to settle him down. This was really excellent writing. Your lemons are so freakin hot and steamy too. I'm just in awe. And I've read your other fic too. Just awesome. That's all I can say. Just freakin awesome.
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story has everything and the sex scenes are fabulous. I'll be sad to see this tale end but live in hope that you'll continue to create Kouga x Inu Yasha stories.
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"The hanyou sat up and glared at Kouga. “There is no way I am letting you go to sleep without us taking a bath first.”" --After all the emotion from the ceremony it was clever to end the chapter on a humorous note.
person inumoon3
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Update soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person kougas&inuyasha\'s girl
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA that was so funny Nasty but funny. I liked what they said during the ceremony. keep up the good work.
person sweetsatincocoa
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter...I know alot of females that look like Hisa! Don't you wish you could cut off someone's arm if they don't like who you're with? BTW, thank your husband for me for serving our country. I have a yellow flag on the back of my car for folks like him. Update your story whenever you can. Great job!
person Atropa
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I was waiting for a good update on one of my favorite stories and here you came and gave me just that.
I like the funny beginning... that brought a big smile. Now I am a bit curious... will you let Sango get serious with the wolf? That would indeed make this story even more incredible.
I also like the way you are portraying Sess... very good. Until next time... I hope the winds of spring gives you a lot of inspiration...
person Yukiko
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
happy that your husband is back and alive for you. Wonder if he knew what you are doing as a pastime.

Still mad you cut Kouga's hair but I'll survive it. and I love the beginning of the chapter, that they're *stuck* giggle
person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehe hahahahahaha... oh god that was a real funny chapter *fals off the chair laughing*.

anyway i loved this chapter. the ceremony was done real nicely. the words that were said by inuyasha and kouga were so nice and that little fight with tanjiro was a very nice touch.

as for the lemon great as always....

i simply love your story... keep up the good work.

you are doing great....
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Miroku faces competition for Sango's affections. Awaiting the next chapter!!