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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woww.. that was a really good inteeresting chappy.. can't wait to see what u have in store for the next chappy :) plz update soon!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
allright, i got two sides for this. first lets cover the good side; you got some just downright dirty stuff here. intresting games of spin the bottle (wow...that's just different) but not in a bad way. the other side that bothers me to no end...they are, what, 11??? i love the story, its great, but i would highly consider raising their ages to be 10th grade, even 9th grade, but something out of pre-teen. you really have some strong smut here, and its great and i really am looking forward to reading more but to know that these kids are just that, kids, it's harder to read. honestly. love the work.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good good! as a request There def should be sum Kagome Inuyasha "stuff" happening lol and maybe a Kagome/Inu/Sess ?? that would be very very nice! the 2 hott guys with Kagome yep def good! ahh plzz update soon!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story soo far.. umm the age of everyone is kinda scary tho.. lol is this like what happened when they were little and are still forced to go to camp every year.. their parents unaware of what happens.. lol that first chappy should be like a flash back then u can go to when they are juniors or sumthin and are all getting forced their again.. and see how their reactions and stuff has changed.. :) hehe very good.. i agree about the sesshomaru inuyasha kagome.. those threee would be awesome.. specially when they are older.. but it definetly needs some Kagome Inu too.. they are my favorite couple! :) keep up the good work!