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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story. more plz
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story. more plz
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You lost me at "her bright red material shirt". Yes. Shirts are, indeed, made of material. WHAT KIND? Sheesh.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update sooooooooooooooooooooon this story is good and i can't wait to see who the rapists are
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...poor Kagome...i'm guessing red eyes would be Naraku or Hiten...or just an OC. intresting. you have a start to a story here, now you need a savior or...well...who knows. take it where you want to see it go, don't rely on readers. i can't wait to see what you do.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuri yuri thair an't anuf of it
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh that was pure evil, leaving us like that! I vote 3-some...and then some.... ^.~
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome! please update again....your writing is wonderful great job, till next time cheers!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. PLz hurry and update.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Am I wrong to assume that the red eyed man is Naraku and the blue eyed man is Koga. It would be interesting if you had them take her somewhere inside to play with her some more and I, of course, would love to see yaoi added to the mix.