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are you continuing this? i gotta say, as a one shot, it sort of stinks because there was no resolution at all. (well, there was but not the type that leaves you feeling as if you read a story) but as chapter one of a story, it kicks ass!!! so continue it please! i liked the way you wrote and i liked the story telling so continue it b/c this has the makings of a great plot!

I like it so far plz update soon! :)

so are we looking now for this to be set fourteen years after she was fifteen or being an AU, is it different? you have such wonderful description that illuminates this story. honestly, you need a better tag line for your story on the main page to bring attention to this wonderful description. you have such a great story started here. i hope you continue on!!! great job!!!