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for Broken

by ShadowofLight

person takky
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is great so far!! When are they going to find out Inu Yasha's (for lack of a better word) "condition?"
person Golden
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I LOVE IT!!! Holy.... You did so well with this! I can't wait to read more!!!! *big grin* Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to find out what happens next!!!!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
person bee_black_cat_hanyou
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! when i saw kougasmate challnge i thought that one would be diffcult because of kuga attuide and inuyasha attuide (persnol i think the word'sit' has got to his head way to mant times) so when i saw yours i loved it! please contuine i beg of you
person Pooky
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! A couple of simple grammar mistakes...unclear antecedent at the end...but other than those I really loved this story! Continue soon!
person kyou
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
person inumoon3
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is so good so far, I can't wait for the update! Is this going to be a Kouga/Inuyasha fic? Poor Inu-chan, how could Kouga hurt Inuyasha like that, and what about Kagome, what happened to her after Kouga hit her? Oh update soon, I wanna know what happens next!!!!!
person inumoon3
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you still will make this fic an MPREG! Cause MPREG is the best thing in the world!!!!!!!!!111
person BlackRaven
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was great! Very angsty-like. You should do a continuance or something in that style.
person yumi557
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am absolutely speechless! i don't know what to say. its simply amazing. its a lot lot better than i had imagined. oh! thank you thank you so much for answering the challenge in such a way. and plz plz continue and update soon. i can't wait to find to out what happens next. and again great work. :D
person miyu-chan
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! it was a great chapter. so detailed. i loved lotus-sama. very well written plz plz update soon. DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT THE PROJECT, you're doing great.