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by ShadowofLight

person Skittles the Sugar Fairy
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi.......This is so awesome! And I like Kiara 'No one harmed her litter' that was so cute! ^^ I can't wait to see what will happen to everyone next!
person KogasHentaiLuver (not signed in)
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope Inu can be helped, poor puppy. And Koga certainly deserves to get his butt kicked for what he did. I can't imagine how Koga's going to feel when he finds out that Inu is pregnant. This is going to be an Inu/Koga fic, right? I mean the pairing didn't just consist of the rape and now the rest of the story is how they're all going to get along once Inu gets his spirit back? Just curious. I'm really enjoying this fic. You have a wonderful way of writing and explaining what's going on.
person kiki
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter! very angsty! keep up the good work.
person crystalstar123
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! this is such a chapter *sniffle*. don't let kagome and gang kill kouga... but a nice bashing would do *evil grins*. when is kuoga and inu going to meet again? plz update soon
person J@DE
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Yhis is a GREAT story!!!! :)
person Neko22
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I doubt Koga's gonna get away unharmed. That's a neat idea to have a half-human? and half-god character. And it was great you wrote a long chapter again! Don't you hate it when you wait for a very long time, when a story is good, that alll you get is a very short chapter? Anyway, please coutinue!
person kinky lurker
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sniffles and wipes away stray tear) oh, wow... that was a great and enjoyable read. and i loved it!

can't wait for the next update, i hope it's soon... kinky lurker doesn't take well to being put off and having to wait... especially with such a fic.

i like the perspective you have on the m-preg situation. most m-preg's i've read, have both characters instantly happy and joyous. i like the angst here. i like the struggle that they are going through to get to any sort of real conclusion with what has happened to them both. i'm such an angst whore and i love what you've done with it! great job! and i can't wait. was i correct in believing the story to be an inu/kouga story, or is it more or less canon?

anyways, it doesn't matter, it's all gravy! update soon!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person yumi557
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* that's so sad *sniffle*. poor inu? plz update soon.
again a great chapter *sniffle* *sniffle* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person mechee
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW....................I mean WOW. THAT WAS SO AWSOME THAT YOU GET AN ALL CAPITAL LETTER REVIEW:) :) :) PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WAS AMAZING. YOU REALLY PUT YOUR HEART INTO THIS CHALLENGE. WELL SINCE YOU LIKE CHALLENGES I HAVE ONE FOR YOU. GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP NOW HURRY............. I'M JUST KIDDING. THIS IS WONDERFUL I LOVE INUY AND KOUGA TOGETHER. MECHEE
person crystalstar123
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! THIS IS AN AWESOME FIC. IT' WAS THE EXCELLENT WAY TO ANSWER THE CHALLLENGE. I LOVED THE FIRST CHAPPIE,

THIS IS GONIG TO BE A M-PREG RIGHT? PLZ PLZ MAKE IT ONE.

PLZ UPDATE SOON