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for Broken

by ShadowofLight

person Laura
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! funnies are good. poor inu...
person inumoon3
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Take your time on the lemon...the better we wait, the better it is when we read it! Well update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person miyu-chan
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very funny chapter. poor kouga how is he gonna comfort inuyasha with his broken ass. hee hee

however i noticed a few mistakes in the chapters. if you need someone to beta your chappies let me know.

ja ne!
person kinky lurker
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(glomps) well... that was just amusing! i love that she shot him in the ass!

is kagome going to be able to help him? or is it going to fall on kouga to save inu-chan? i hope its kouga. as much as i like the whole inu/kag thing... inu and kouga are always just so much more interesting to read about!

great update (just watch out for those spelling errors) and i hope to get another one soon! have fun, taxi!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
person kougasmate (too lazy to sign in)
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!! great capter again. it's very funny. poor kouga. i loved the kagome hitting kuoga's butt thinghy. anyway except for a few spelling mistakes yu are doing fine. if you need a beta do let me know. i'll be glad to help you. my e-mail address is cjd557@yahoo.com.

ja ne! ^-^
person Rawben
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! i really like this one... update often!
person Ami-chan
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, update soon this tory is amazing, and I'm usually not a slash shipper, much less INU/KOUG, but this is amazingly written and the plot is original. Please continue.
person inumoon3
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Damn Kouga, why can't he just listen and give Inuyasha time! Shippo was to cute threatening to hurt Kouga, I think that later on in the story that Inuyasha and Kouga should adopt Shippo, I just think that would be adorable! Well hope you update soon!!!!
person Wow
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool to death...MORE PLEASE!