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Writer's block is normal. If you were a continual welp of knowledge and vernacular, people would become bored with you and eventually try to assasinate you. If you need help, email me at cocoabean18us@yahoo.com and I'll brainstorm with you. I think your story is great and that as long as you put out quality work, you're entitled to any amount of time necessary. Good luck!

at least your are honest. I'll wait for the next chapter and wish you're writer block leave you soon.

Take your time!!

If you want some advice to get over the block, here it is:

Do what I do! Visualize what you want to do then try to take it to "paper" and see where it leads you. If you don't like it, you can always rewrite it. :) That's the great thing about writing.

okay so you faced a mental block, big deal! Don’t get too worried about it. All writers face such blocks and that should not be the reason why anyone would hate u, flame you or stop reading your story. At least you informed us of the story status. Many people just leave the fic unattended for day with no info as to where the story went. i very much appreciate that.

Anyway don’t worry just take relax for a few days and after that reads the first 4 chapters and play it on your mind like a movie. Visualize it actually happening in front of you and then think what you can do next. I think you’ll be able to find a clue. My sis always says it work or you can ask a friend for help. You never know what ideas might come up when two put their mind to it.

don’t worry you’ll get your muse back soon. If you need any help just let me know….

kougasmate

Rin has never feared Sesshomaru. Yeah, he may have growled at her that first time but she still approached him.

Your descriptions feel a little too lengthy to me and, in the case of your demi-god, a little out of context. You're doing a fine job, really, but some things just kind of nag at me when I read them.

update soon

ooooooooohhhhhhhhh! so many gifts. i want one too... *pouts*.

and please don't hurry up with inu's pregnancy. 5 month's great. and plz plz no rape inu by naraku no no no don't want that....

okay now i am acting totally loony. anyway great chappie again . love it. but when does inu meet kouga? is it inthe next chapter? does kouga save inu when naraku attacks. oh plz plz update soon, i am dying of suspence.

I think you should drag Inu-chan's pregnancy out, cause it's just so much better when you go into detail! When are Inuyasha and Kouga going to see eachother again, I''m dying from suspense!!!! Well update soon!!!!!!!

I'm glad that Inu-chan is doing better, but I'm worried about Kouga. He isn't doing so well. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

I really enjoy your story you are good at going into detail. I am not even going to say anything about your spelling or grammer because i cant spell worth beans. My story Bitten had alot of grammer mistakes also. its good you took out the time to fix the mistakes that shows you want your story to be the best it can be. Please update soon i like where your taking the plot.