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for Broken

by ShadowofLight

person rin136
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about Saske (sp) for the other boy
person Melissa
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much! Its really good. oh and names, maybe Solo. I think those names sound cute together - Souta and Solo
person kyou
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.... for the other son maybe you could name him yuki or kohaku
person Caitriona
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Ginmaru would be a good name. Silver circle.
On another note. I have really enjoyed your story. I just wish that you would have more interaction between Kouga and Inuyasha.

Caitriona
person releena
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. please update soon i really wanna see what happens next
person Ravyn
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So you mean to tell me Inuyasha is going to get raped AGAIN wow too bad for him but any how i love your story and i stayed up all night just to read all of it and i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!
person Polka dot
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would leave it as a stump, most everyone gives it back, most just pretend it was never cut off and that's OCC, IMO. He doesn't have an arm, that's part of who Sessy is.
person takkycat
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo, I LOVE the latest chapter!!
person kougasmate (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

I thought you weren’t going to continue this story. it felt so bad because this story is rally a good one. But when I saw the update I was lke Yay! And doing a happy dance in my room. My roommate was looking strangely at me. Anyway great chapter, the size of it made up for the “no update” for so long. I am glad you’re continuing this story. *Glomps* As for Sesshy, I would love to have him have his arm grow, maybe when he mates with Heiko or something? And poor heiko could get her child-carrying capacity back. I would really like to see her with someone. Poor thing has suffered so much. *Cuddles Heiko, gets conked by sesshy*. Ouch!

About inuyasha, it’s good to see him finally settled down. We should have more kouga-inu cuddly moemt. I am not forcing anything on you; it’s just a suggestion.

So Kagome, finally dumped Heiko Huh? Wonder who’s she gonna be with? Anyway I must say a great chapter and I’ll definitely be looking forward for more.

/(^.^)\
person Rawben
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!! sess! he's so cute!! ;)