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for Broken

by ShadowofLight

person Tori Chan
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! Pretty please with sugar on top and a cherry and everything else you like on top of it UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
person Tricia
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story -I hope that Naraku gets what he deserves! A very slow and painful death! And that Sess not only ends up with her, but helps Inu and realizes he does care for his brother and nephews! And I hope that Kouga and Inu can work everything out and end up as happy mates! And some more lemon!!!! Can't wait until u update!! :)
person JewlzGem
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this has been a great story and you have kept to the true nature of the characters as well. I love it, and the new demi goddess is awesome. I cant wait to read what happens next.
person Havo Tellenoi
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! it's really, really, really awesomes and the pot is great. please keep updating and stuffs. thanks.
person Snowfall
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter nine: Loved the action and suspense! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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person nette
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story was really interesting. i luv lotus' character and how she doens't take crap from no one. can't wait for the next chapter. keep it up.
person Fluffy
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll say this......."PLEASE DON"T LET NARAKU RAPE INUYASHA!!!!!" *begs and begs* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE..........

Thank you! Great story btw* I have throughtly enjoyed it so far.
person Toni
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have really enoyed Broken - lots of plot twists in it. I hope you will update soon.
person Jade
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need a name for the second boy?
You could have Inuyasha name the little guy for his grandfather, Inunotashio(sp?)
Might surprise Sesshomaru-shrug-


Are you going to have Sesshomaru and heikou get together?
they'd make a good couple.
Please update soon!
person kb16
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i know this name might sound wierd but i think the name sane(saa-nee) would be nice or maninu. but i think they kinda suck.