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OMG WOOOOOW!!!! i loved your story it took me a while to get threw specially sense i had work and stuff! XD

you had a lot of twists in your story that surprised me i was wondering what would happen next in it! i love your original characters i really really love the twins they are soo cute!!! X3

i loved then end it was really different that instead of ending it after the fight you ended it with them in the future! the end started out being sad but then turned out being happy! i like the lemon with them and how the twins take it! XD

Very much enjoyed Broken. I thought you did an excellent job with the battle scenes. Everything was so imaginative and heroic. I really liked this story.
sincerely,
jazzy

omg,

That was awesome sis. I am so glad you finally updated. Heck, even I wouldn't have thought of such a great twist for a story.

Poor Sessy though, his love is gone. cries with Sesshoumaru

Great work and can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Don't worry about updating so much. Don't force stories to come out. If your readers are true readers they will wait and understand that every author goes through a time of non writing. I believe it is called writers block. Oh yeah, I am suffering from that right now with my stories.

Great chapter, I loved it as usual. Your updates make the wait worth while.

I say again....WOW!! I am soo happy for Shippo, he finally got stronger.

Alright you..

I love this first chapter.

Honestly, I like the way you have written it, for us to see InuYasha being scared and upset and Kouga as the not so nice wolf that we all know. I love the way the one female beats Kouga up too.

I can't wait to see where this goes and I am off to read chappy two.

Love ya Sis

Kagome shot an arrow and he lost most of his body.His head ,neck and shoulders(only) floated away in a cloud of his poisonous gas.I really hope you put the next chapter up soon,its a great story and I can't wait to see what else is in store for Inu and the rest.

I see you've received answers and the bits and pieces are all there but I thought I'd throw in my two cents. While Kouga, Inuyasha, and Kagura were all fighting outside with Kagome and Shippou watching, Miroku and Sango confronted and defeated the puppet Naraku by themselves inside the castle in eppies 39-40 (sorry I can't break it down more, hubby's hogging the DVD player right now).

It was before that that Kagome destroyed all of Naraku's body, leaving him with just a head. She did it when upset about Naraku's manipulation of Kohaku and Sango in eppie 30. He remains just a head for a while as he's still pretending to be Kagewaki, he just uses illusions to portray the rest of his body (something Kikyou sees through in eppie 32). Eppie 32-33 (again, sorry for being less than specific) show how Naraku recreated his body by absorbing the strongest parts of tons of demons which had already fought each other. But all of this happened before Inuyasha and Kouga even met.

I hope this helped some and I wasn't too late giving you any information. Also, I have the first three seasons on DVD, I'm not shy about DL the rest, and I have the entire manga series (some scanlated, others the Viz release) so if you have any more questions I'd be happy to help. Sadly, Inuyasha is my obsession.

~Silence~

I believe that everything but his head and upper shoulders was destroyed.

D_

Just aired Thursday (6/7/07) on Cartoon Network - Episode: Naraku's Insidious Plot. Naraku has killed off Sango's village. While she fights Inuyasha, Miroku & Kirara go after Naraku. They battle, Inuyasha, Kagome, & Sango rejoin them and Naraku takes back the jewel shard from Sango. Battle ends when Inuyasha chops of Naraku's baboon head. Body continues to fight until Sango realizes they are fighting a puppet. She tells Inuyasha to strike for the heart. It reveals a piece of wood (?) with a hair of Naraku's wrapped around it. Back at the castle were Sango's little brother killed everyone from his village, it is also revealed that Naraku is in the body of the young lord.

Haven't met Kouga yet as the storyline progresses.

I can tell you with absolute certainty that Sango and Miroko were fighting another one of Naraku's dolls while Kouga and Inuyasha were outside fighting. Kagome, well she just stood around yelling "Inuyasha!" like she always does, lol. I would tell you which episode it was from, but, like you, I'm too lazy to go upstairs and look through my DVD collection to see which episode it was. You'll just have to take my word on it. I have all the DVDs for the series that have been released and have watched it several times. Hope that helps. If you really need to know which episode, email me and I will tell you. Oh, the scene where Kagome strikes Naraku with her arrow and does some major damage to him was another episode, but that damage was to his body. The episode where Naraku only had his head left was when Inuyasha and Sess attacked him after Naraku tried to absorb Sess and failed.