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for Spirit of the Moon

by witchchild686

schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a good story. an epilouge would be nice as would a sequel.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person inu_lover1978
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. I am impressed on you whole story from the beginning to the end. The understanding and all its content flowed remarkably.
person TAJE
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9) Oh Boo-hoo, done already? Very good, I loved this story looking for more to come. Keep writing! Always a pleasure. Your Lemon was good, though rushed, I still liked it. Peace!
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5) I don't know, but I have the murderous mind to castrate a certain demon lord. Well maybe neuter him. Anyway, I'll continue on. Loving it so far! Peace.
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6) You know, I love it when an author sees characters in their story and use them. I may not know of the other characters of the anime, but I appreciate the way your usage of them. I love it when Sesshomaru is tortured. I love how some authors force him to deal with humility. Loving this! Peace!
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch. 1) Yes indeed. Very intrigued. I like what I'm reading so far. Will continue on!
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7) You know, the joy of being the creator of a story is to make the world of your characters anyway or anything you want. You can make a human woman have a baby the next day blowing 1 hour at a time and and the child grows in 18 hrs. fully knowledged and ready for the world. So Write On! Peace!
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2) Dreams. I love dreams. Connections, I love connections. This is really turning out very good. I will continue on.
person TAJE
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8) Awww! Tears in my eyes! What a WAFF! Joy and Pain, Sunshine and Rain! All in one. You're Killing Me. But I love It!