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for His Thoughts

by inuyashaslover08

person rin
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the belt he wears that you called a sash is actually called an obi in japanese
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, actually quite good, but the spacing is quite annoying and you had a few misspellings.. but nothing too bad.

^_^
person Xena warrior princess
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it was so cute. inuyasha and kagome deserve to be together. I hope there is another like it.
person misswildfire
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya for hentai minds!
person anaidil
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! That was an excellent way of writing the story...I loved how you put the story in first person being InuYasha's thoughts. I love.... I really, really, really love it. Nice work!!!!
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute! Great, cool, sweet story! I hope you´ll write more stories^^
person comicfancat
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this,it was well written.I'd like to think that maybe this would happen with them
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello hello!! that was a really good one shot!!! i hope u do more!!!

Ja ne!!
person catt
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo I sooo loved that!! Great chappie girly, can't wait until ur next update!!!^_^