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for Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera

by plumcider

person kiiru
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got me laughing and crying in front of my computer screen finish this story or I'll hunt you down an-... Oops... Well... Akward moment... Update your story! Sooner or later you're going to kill someone with the cliff hangers. By the way 'the talk' was and always will be the most evil and entertaining thing i've ever read. Thats gonna give him nightmares for a while... Anyway... Update! You damn near re-defined the term drama! Don't stop now!
person snowfall
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. That was such a sweet chapter. Miss Higurashi was her typical motherly self. Poor Inu, so nervous. The bits with Shippou was very humorous. A very well written chapter. It looks like you took your time.

Hope you get better soon. Get plenty of rest and take your time with the next chapter.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm. well...mama took that well. you really managed to catch inuyasha with his baka diesase in full swing. LOL. man, i think i would have found the shot gun after he said, 'i'm keeping kagome'. GRR...i think he is earning himself ten sits a second with that one, when kag gets down wind of all of this. i can't wait to see what mama does for inu. (i'm thinking rings...) very well. lol. great chapter, great story, keep it up!!!
person Kirah
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is kinda slow but I don't mind. And... a collar, handcuffs, and ancle cuffs? This will be... interesting, to say the least.
Also, I mistook you for Cutie Pie Hentai (I thought this story was by her). You should be flattered... and if you've never heard of Cutie Pie Hentai, look her up. NOW.
PLEASE UPDATE!
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW. that was cute...and a real funny bind for poor yash. WOW...sitting through that with him....just wow. great one though, really well done!!!
person Kams
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please write soon!
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And yet again, I must applaud you for another amazing chapter. Well done! Keep it up. Gosh...I'd be embarrassed too, if I were Inuyasha...jeez, getting the 'talk' from SESSHOMARU of ALL people?! Although I suppose it's better than Myoga or one of them MUCH older significant others Inu has in his life...but still! ANYWAY, until next...
Claire ^_~
person Crossbow Trueshot
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
phew.....that was a long wait

but it looks like you know where your going with this...and no sesh really didnt seem that much outta place.

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
person Jasmine Fields
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. I really like this fic and can't wait til you update next. Not to
mention... I am just seeing some fantastically funny intervention
from Ms. Higurashi for this particular story! lol... O the fun that I
can't wait to read up on!!!

-Jazz-
person snowfall
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You handled the characters quite nicely and I love the humor. Great job on the formal vocabulary for Sess. Poor Inu and Kag's, so embarrassed and unsure. I really like this plot. It's been done before, but I was never prompted to read. Great job. I look forward to your next update.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

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