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for Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera

by plumcider

person Rosiel-chan
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good fanfic!! Please update asap, I really like it!
person kat
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is awesome! so awesome. seriously you should be so proud.. ive read sooo many inu fanfics that are clash with the original story-line or just have the characters all ooc but your story is so satisfying, cant wait to read more!! (hope you get better too ^_^)
person Simonkal of Inuy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story was really a breath of fresh air!! I love the plot and how it focuses on more than just the sexual aspect, but also the emotional sides as well. You've truely succeeded in keeping the characters in character to a fault! I would love to add this story to my favs but I doubt that this sight allows you to do that, however i will be checking on a regular basis for your updates!! Great Job!! Also is this fic posted on ff.net?
person ~ME
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello!! Just wondering if you were going to post the rest of this wonderful fic--I keep checking back but *sigh* no new chappies.....keeping my fingers crossed and hopin' real hard!!....it was getting to a really good part, too.......please, please....update soon??!! I miss all the good Inu/Kag fics....where have they all gone? :(
person kagome1312
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luvd it plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Radish
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has captured my imagination. I almost dream about it. I'm not sure exactly what, but there's just something about this story that captivates me. Innocence, or something. Hope. Kagome still has this adorable kind of innocence and naivete even after what's happened. And so much happiness and hope. And there's just something cute about them getting married and potentially having a child when Kagome still isn't even sure of his feelings. Of course it probably won't all be perfect here on out, there could still be some angst yet waiting in the future, but the potential quantity of pure unfiltered high-quality all-natural fluff with no preservatives that this scenario can bring just makes me giddy. So, please, do continue. 7 months without updates is a scary sign.
person DizzySweetDreams
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is beyond wonderful and brilliant. (It has plot!)



I've read your original story and thought it was great, but this...it's fifteen times better! I'm
extremely glad that you've decided to put the story back up. Makes me a little bit curious on
what's going to happen.



Inuyasha and Kagome really need to get laid - it will get them to be more relaxed.



I hope your antibodies kick that sickness out of your body.

GO TEAM GO! FIGHT! FIGHT! WHEN IN DOUBT, JUST GIVE 'EM A BITE!


PS - I'll review your story on ff.net as well ;).

person Kirah Ocean
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've reviewed this chapter before (Kirah- remember me?) BUt now someone else is here. And I ahve one statement for you-
Update, or I will have your head.
But besides that, this story is still amazingly good, and very... soap-operay. If that makes any sense. But I couldn't stop reading, and at times I couldn't even speak or think straight. It's been almost a year since you posted this chapter, but I'm still really hopeful... PLEASE! Just try to write another chapter! For us!
person lost child
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u just got urself a new fan. I liked this story from the very beginning and there isn't a chapter I don't like. I love all 15 of them. And I can be patient until you update, but still I hope it's soon
person shaid
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's pretty damn good. I'm totally looking forward to more! I'll be checking on FFnet to see when you update, but I'll definately be reading here. Sex is much better unedited.