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for Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera

by plumcider

person snowfall
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Damn! That was good. The concept, the writing style, the characterizationa and angst, the lemon. Oh yeah. I like this. On to chapter two!
person snowfall
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! He knows something is wrong and he's trying so hard to make it right. Too bad Kag's can't just come out and tell him. That was a funny ending even if a bit bittersweet. I'm glad he knows she is lying.
person snowfall
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess Inu didn't overhear the girl's conversation, heh? This is so angsty. I can't even guess what you're going to do next. I just hope it has some action in it. This is one of the few very well written stories that I have happened upon. I had almost decided not to look for stories to read as the amount of quality work has greatly declined. Thank you for deciding to grace us with your talent. Now, where is chapter seven? I anxiously await.

person starlit333
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was a really good chapter! Did Inuyasha hear their conversation? I guess not since he didn't know what Shippou was running from. Anyway, please update soon!
person drake220
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if i were kagome, i'd be like, 'go get the damn shards yourself, you convinent amnesiac! and fry while your doing it!!!!!!!!!' i mnea, OUCH. not having the guy who took your viriginty even remembering?? cold. ice cold.
person drake220
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!!!!!!!! i want to hear shippou's answer!
person sky
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really LOVE this story. PLease, Please hurry and update.
person lil_rocker_chick
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, update.
person jamie
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. PLz update soon
person kelly
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!