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oh my god....WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN?!?! NO U CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!!!UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!

oh boy. the poor guy. kag needs to set him straight, and soon. will they be alright?

oh no!!! he thinks he raped her!! oh my goodness! shippou better open up his mouth and say something b/c the emotional angst that will come from this is going to kill me!! update soon!!

ITs getting REALLY good update soon.

AGH!!! theres no more. :-X that makes me sad. what also makes me sad is poor yash, sitting there with shippo going deaf by thier words. poor kid! dear god...this is one intercate story you have woven. i agree with the title. well...now comes teh fun part of explinations. you really have worked so wonderfully with teh story, and have hit the proverbial nail on teh head with the character definitions. amazing, as always. i love how you had sango withhold her judgements instead of jumping in and telling kagome it was fine. very well writen. GREAT story, wonderful action and dialogue. keep it up!!!

Great story so far! Can't wait to read the rest! :D

Uh oh....not good I am totally afraid now for what is to come. Gods please let there be a happy ending!!!^^ UPDATE!!!

Update soon

oh no... shall Shippou tell InuYasha? That would not bode well for Kagome, but it would create some interesting plot twists, I'm sure! ... just throwing some ideas....

wow. this is so cool! i can't wait to read more of it!