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for Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera

by plumcider

schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was...great! So I’m going to die? Well, then. I guess I screwed up more than I thought, huh? man, talk about a thought to dwell over. double damn. so...Fluffykins has something for the baka? i want to believe it to be tensaiga but something says it is deeper then that...and has to do with their dad, ey? hmm...you got my attention, as always. keep it up!!!!
person Cheyenne
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I want to know what happens! I really like the story, and I know others feel the same, so you have to keep writing.
person FayeMegan
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! very emotional! I had a sneaking suspision that they would need Sesshoumaru's sword, eek! I hope that sessy will do it! poor little kagome
person Selena
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this story is coming along great, something of interest around every corner. I can't wait to read more!
person Crossbow Trueshot
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow great plot twist...and hooray kagome will live and not in some stupid way
Hopefully after this Inuyasha will be able to admit his feelings to her..
Keep up the good work

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
person kylie
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! please writ more soon!
person Chokoreto
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ITS SOO SAD TT" i hope Kagome doesnt' die! I juss hope she'll be able to wake up to talk to Inuyasha! if you did MAKE her DIE! i'll chase after you with pitchfork! kukuku~ hahahs but PLEASE UPDATE AND CONTINUE ON! its reallly goood!
person drake220
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hold on one god damn minute! if he taints her, how the hell are they supposed to have sex?!?!!?!?! (oh yes, let's concentrate on the 'important' things. the fact that she's dying? totally inconsequential. ::sigh:: i need some priorities...) update soon!
person ish
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, now I'm sad! new installment, please!
person Crossbow Trueshot
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh....nice explanation for the energy error....
keep it coming.......and good work


-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot