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uumm ummm, very nice. I loved his dirty mouth too! Would be cool to see him wake up and get embarassed over what he did, finally admit he loved her, might be a cute scene. Thanks very nice!

OMG WTF was that? *shudders* that was .......... i dont know what it was but it was something......it was a shocker alright...

this is a really good story. hope u can update sson. i really wanna no wat happens. i think that u should write a second lemon, u r really good at it.... keep it up.

........o_O. that was your first lemon? wow...shall i go as far as to say it deserves a standing ovation? wow. that was great!! i can't believe that was the first one you wrote, in all honesty. great job! i, personally, would have loved to see exactly how demon Yasha got Kagome to the position they were in (her thought train of the whole shabang) but then again, i don't think there was that much to tell. WONDERFUL lemon! really, honestly a great job!

WOW.. yep thats all I can say.. that was soo fucking good! keep up the excellent work! :)

Holy...that was absolutely awesome! I love it like whoa. You're an excellent writer I must say! Please keep up with the deliciousness of Kag x Inu..I'm so bothered by these San X Inu's and Nar x Kags...bleh x.x Keep up the excellent work!

Snoe

btw..you must have a mailing list lmao ^.~

Well, i really liked it, so, i think you should keep going!

ooh wow...that was intense and hot...very good lemon, I loved the dirty mouth and all, thats how I picture Inu being, unless hes just growling and snarling lol...read very few demon Inu lemons and Id like to read more, again good lemon I liked it..ALOY...*blushes at her hentainess* lol....but one question..I know it was without plot but how the hell did Inu go demon anyhow??? huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

please, please, please, PLEASE! WRITE MORE NASTY THINGS, MORE POSITIONS, other than missionary and doggy styl they are to clecha. It got me very VERY hott, you have a sexy nack for this. DEAR LORD UPDATE SOON!!

This was your first Lemon? Holy shit! If this was your first i can't wait to see how good you'll get with practice then, god... that was steamy, good and... oh man, i've got a hard on now... gotta calm it down.

(A few moments later)

Okay... that's better, now where was i? Oh yeah: I also just love Youkai Inuyasha and Kagome stories, there really aren't many out there but i'm about to fix that, i've been working on a series of one-shots featuring the Youkai Inuyasha called "Crimson Eyes of Inuyasha" and the first story should be out soon.

But back to your story: It was freaking good, i also agree that this is the... third fic i've read that 'tit-fucking' in it, hehehe, so nice going there! Hopefully you'll write more stories soon, you got the talent!

Also, if you want to check out my Lemons as well, i have a number of fics here on this site as well, but the one with most Lemons in them is titled "The Sinners", then there is one called "Loneliness of the Free Wind" as well. So check them out if you're ever interested along with my other fics.

Well, this is long enough for now, hope to hear from you soon!

- Zelix, "King of Plots" and "God Of Lemons"