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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your should write another lemon between kagome and youkai inuyasha
im not really in to the mixing of the charter's and i agree with the main matches and
this is a great story about this match of charter's
im not really in to the mixing of the charter's and i agree with the main matches and
this is a great story about this match of charter's
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa dat was good for a first time. if u had to choose rating u up to 10. ill choose 9.99 + .1 (did dat make sense?) well it means its perfect. lol. i hope we get to read more of this
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was a great story. That was an awsome lemon. You need to add more chapters.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... that was interesting... good.. but interesting... it was very rough... which i like... lol... you should make more
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot. They did it ten times? You should make another lemon showing ALL the sex positions. It would be really sexy.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that was a great story you should keep writing.Mabye a story will come to you.If they will be in the story i wonder what their friends and kagomes mom will say.After all that kagome might even get pregnent. Just some ideas. Anyway i think that was a good story and it was good for your first lemon. I hope you keep writing.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. thats a\basically all I can say right now... If thats your first lemon I want to see what the rest of them are like. good job! : ).
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it. its sexy in a creepy way, no one really writes lemons that involve guys fucking girls between their boobs, but you did. AND ITS FUCKING ASWOME! i wouldn't have guessed that it was your first time writing a lemon cuz it looks like you've written them a couple of times; but WOW this is great. write another inuyasha and kagome lemon please! pretty please?
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU GO GIRLL!!!!!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is THE best lemon I've ever read! Awesome! Don't be nervous, just gimme a sequel! :)