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for Amber and Gold

by SketchD6

person andross
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man your awsome. i only read a handful of stories that i think are good and i must say your number 1 right now!!
person Rawben
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what??? tragic??? no! no way! dang it! ...i want fluffyness.... and updates. good girl.
person drake220
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this! it's well done and different then other rin/sess fics. usually sess is like some sort of wild animal and rin is basically used. here, its interesting how you are illustrating just how foreign these feelings are for sessy-sama. i like the way you write and the dialog also. the only problem are some glaring spelling mistakes. beyond that, this fic is wonderful!
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. this is pretty good. i've been reading crap lately, nice to know there are still good stories out there... update soon!
person Shadiyaray
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting and I really liking it. Please continue.

Shady
person Kel
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sketch, I love this story! Keep those updates coming! :)
person Rina
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a good story. The way you portray the character's lives is refreshing and very intresting. I hope to find out what happened between Rin and Sesshomaru soon, and really like the way each family member has thier role in interacting with each other. Please update soon.
person thebigW
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Watch your spelling. Other than that, I'm liking this fic. How have you set up poor Rin, surrounding her with gestating, lactating women when she's in heat? If Sess blinks the wrong way, she'll jump him!

Please continue!

W.
person Kel
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A Sess/Rin fic! It's off to a great start, so I expect many chapters soon! :P P.S. Are you going to update BSS anytime soon? *hint, hint!*
person Hentai Jane
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning Sketch! This chapter sets a nice mood for the rest of the fic by letting the reader see the close family bond between Inuyasha and Kagome. It's great that Rin is a part of their lives also. I am like everyone else.....what the heck is going on between Rin and Sess!?The suspense is killing me! XD Hope to read more soon neechan!
Hugs
HJ