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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This so far is a great story accept that im trying to guess if the whole thing at inuyasha village was a flashback or what it wasnt clear. and i love the way you take the time to develope the characters and introdue the plot of the story not just jumping straight inot sex. lemons are good just often they make both characters roam out of their normal character. if that makes any since ? but you did a good job keeping sesshoumaru acting like i woudl exspsect him to act . and not doing what allot of writers do and make rin says stuff like (rin would like a drink of water) in the anime she doesnt talk like that but people like to do that and it PISSES me off. So good job with that lol . i hope you will update soon. bye
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good and i liked the ending. smart and witty without falling into more emotions
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! the angst! *cries*
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are so EVIL, you left it right there. I'm so pissed. Sorry, but i really am loving this. I'll do any thing if you would finish this. Please UPDATE soon. I don't think i can handle not reading the rest. Please update. YOUR FAN.
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know this is very rude and I will repent later but please . . .UPDATE
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow pretty good. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh make it sappy please!! and fluffy and lemony too
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I said but it was good......Now, I think I hope what the fight was about....But, I can't wait to read more of your story...so please update soon.....
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job! Nice and slow, drawing out the details when we need to see/feel it. At times I think that some parts might be lacking in detail, but more room for us to fill in the blanks as we'd want it. I could be wrong, but I see your delivery as more subtle than some of the other Rin/Sess stories, and this is a good change. Don't get me wrong; I'm all for a strong-willed Rin going head-on against Sess, but I think sometimes the unspoken conflicts are more interesting than a yelling/fighting match. I'd love to find out what caused this argument of theirs!
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. Awesome detail's, not repetitive at all and hook, line, and sinker. Bravo. I hope to see more of this soon, so please update quickly. I would also like to 'cast my vote' on the type of storyline this should evolve into. Personally, I'm really really hoping that you make it a NICE, HAPPY, ending ROMANCE...please? Great ending for the last chap by the way.