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for Amber and Gold

by SketchD6

person Ashes
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so, i don't think i've ever actually read a fic with sesshomaru and rin before, yours was the first. and i'm happy to say you've made a good impression on me. i think i'll read your other story now! :-) I really like this one. sesshomaru is very much in character and i love the bright happy young woman rin has become. hehe. poor lord sesshomaru...all those years of hating humans and you go and fall in love with one. guess you're not so unlike your father afterall. :-)
Ashes
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa, that was really freakin good! yey for the upcoming lemon!!
person emily
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay i love it write more write more!!!!!!!! please i just love he he and it was nice and calm haven't seen that in a ff in a while lovin it write more thanx bye
person emily
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more i want more please i just love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please update
person Hentai Jane
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Neechan!
I am impressed sweetie. No matter how you try to deny it, you are a skilled writer whose talents are growing and whom should be proud of herself. *hugs* I really liked the scene between Rin and Sess in ch 5, very touching. I am now off to read ch 6.
Hugs
HJ
person Vin
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. Please keep going, and make the next chap at LEAST the begining of a lemon. Your writing style is unique and artistic. One thing's for sure, you've got a fan right here. Update soon.

Vin
person drake220
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, she always WAS very affectionate. i can see why she would be upset though. she was behaving in a very morally ambigious fashion but, hey, with a guy like sessy-sama, would you keep your hands to yourself? no, i thought not. why? b/c you're not a reptile. sess better figure out what he's going to say though. oh! can sess say totally the wrong thing and get completely confused by her? that'd be hysterical!
person andross
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot FINNALY indeed. keep it up your doing great!
person Bookreader9999
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter is good. Nice tension between them. Anxiously awaiting what happens next.
person animegirl007
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes...Oh yes....that was good.....the woman chapter was excellent....the description to the kiss and how she felt being a woman now beautiful.....update ...I need more!!!!!