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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im very interested with your fic. I think it has a lot of potential. Pls dont take this in the wrong way: You have an incredible way to describe detail, emotions, and atmosphere you need to make your chapters longer. The thing is that when your readder get really into the chapter it ends and your left with this, "hey I was readding that!" feeling. Anyway keep going and dont get discouraged, your doing a good job.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Please update soon
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man...you can't just leave in the middle of a scene like that!! Talk about cliffy!!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sexy, realistic and hot. nice job!!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story,nice and creative,and good use of fluff,slight spelling errors(mostly with e's nd i's) but overall,a very good fanfic
your friend,and fellow author,
reo,aka,the beast
8 out of 10
your friend,and fellow author,
reo,aka,the beast
8 out of 10
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Loud Applause in the theatre* WOOt! BRAVO! Astounding! GREAT JOB !
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this story, so please update quickly.that last cliff hanger was quiet 'entertaining' yet i must say DAMN YOU!!!! lol. Anyway, your improving with your spelling but please keep updating asap. i'm looking forward to seeing what happens to Rin and Sesshomaru.again, please update QUICK! thank you.
Kakes
Kakes
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very touching. I enjoyed it. Please update soon!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey! and yey for lemons! and ...yey for sexual tension! you could put that in there before the lemon!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who ever doesn't review should just...ok i'm not that mean but it's mean not to review on such a good story. I loved that last chapter. At first i was thinking maybe he'll say no again. I could only hope that he would go after her. You have to update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.