rate_review Reviews

good one!!! I'm glad this one has a sequel and I thought myself that'd i'd be better dispearsed throughtout other chapters!!!

Looking forward to more!!!

I wish I was Kagura esp. the one in pair 3! OMG that was hot. It's hard to see Sesshy in a suit though but whatever he wears will look good I guess. I think these stories are great and you are too. I hope you get the next story out soon!

*laughs softly....* Hey, you make me out to be a queen or something...

I just read your second and third story. The second was a bit rough, but I loved the ending where everybody talks about hearing them. That was a hoot!!
The third was simply wonderful - I loved it. Fluff and lemon in one beautiful piece.
Keep up the good work!!

Hee hee thank you so much for updating! I like both of them. Poor (extronainarliy lucky) Kagura! I think that 'Bittersweet' would be a cool name for the collection becuase the lemons are sweet but it's bitter not knowing if their feelings will stand the test time. That and their whole relationship seems bittersweet. But it's your collection and you know much better than I do what to do with it. On a completly different note why weren't Kagome and Inuyasha together in that last shot? Please don't say you've gone Inu/Kik or Kog/Kago. It's so hard to find good Inu/Kag lemons. You're one of the few Inu/Kag smut writers who isn't a deranged fangirl( not that I can complain about deranged fangirls being one and all) and can write in complete sentences! Um, anyway back to sanity I really hope you continue not only this collection but your chapter stories too! (insert smiley face here)
*Dazzled*
P.S Sorry for the abriviations, unsolicted advice, whinning, ranting, pleading, and blowing about two sentences metioned in passing *way* out of porportion. I've had a mountain dew and most of a cherry coke today and it's clearly more than my system can handle. I'm really, really sorry. I'll try to be more sane next time I review.
P.P.S Have a nice day(or night)!!! I just had to end on a happy note!

Ahh, beautiful.... what else can I say....
Hope to see a new piece soon.

Hey! thanx for mentioning me! And yes, you have, once again, rocked my socks. If you keep this up, I may have to go buy more socks!

So... me and Atropa are one of your idols huh? That's flattering to know...

Anyway, as for the review: A few very minor spelling/Grammar errors, nothing to make a fuss about though. The story was excellent, the lemon hot and the ending funny like hell, all in all, another full 5 star one-shot!

Oh by the way, i read your request and posted it into that 'advertisement' fic, if you want me to post another, just let me know.

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wow, these are good, I can't wait for more!!!

WHOOO!!! Now that was one hell of a one-shot! Excellent, full 5 star rated work! Oh man... i thought that only Atropa, myself and a few others did these series of one-shot thingies, glad to see fresh blood on this side of fanfictions as well.

I am Zelix, also known as "King of Plots" and "God of Lemons" and i'm also an author here at AFF.net.

I also have two of these one-shot series thingies, called "The Sinners" and "Crimson Eyes of Inuyasha", if you're ever interested then check them out if you will.

Also, my friend Atropa has a MASSIVE load of those collections as well, "Night Time", "Opposite Attracts", "Coctail Mix" and "Forbidden Fantasies"...

I myself also have plenty of other fanfictions as well, check them out whenever you want.

see ya with your next one-shot then!