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Wow... I adore your writing and I'm so glad you're continuing this story :) You made my day. Thank you.

So just what did Sesshoumaru do to driver her away? I thought everything was going great for them. Please consider updating soon. Later.

Okay just finished reading the first story. One word to that one....AWSOME!. Okay now continue to write this one. This is good

I read your 'Elsewhere' fic and found it absolutely wonderful. It is more fulfilling when the main characters fight to find love instead of having, like most authors tend to do, both of them immediately love each other in the beginning. Especially when it comes to a stoic demon who does not understand the concept of the human emotion called 'love'. That is why I enjoy fics that are angsty; and when the couple finally get 'there', it's very rewarding, don't you think? Life just doesn't seem to work that way; at least most of the time. What I have seen is that when two people believe to fall in love 'at first sight', when their personalities come to surface, this so-called 'love' fades with time. Until both can know each other fully, which is difficult considering a couple could live with each other almost their entire life and still not know each other completely, can the real 'love' flourish with the acceptance of each others qualities and faults together. Blessed are the few that do manage to find their perfect match right from the start.

This sequel looks just as entertaining. Not your typical 'and they lived happily after' fairy tale. Can't wait 'till you update. Keep up the great work!

augie

I am confused ^^ Umm help me understand ^^ But i love your writing. I hope all will be well and they have children and stuff ^^

I am in awe of your ability to create images so beautiful and scary. Your exploration of that which is truly human through the juxtaposition with that which is not is compelling. You exercise my appreciation of these characters and I thank you.

Ok...don't think of me as some weird stalker...lol, reviewing twice in one day and all, and on different sites! Oh well, hope you don't mind! I guess my earlier predictions were somewhat right...that Sesshomaru is perhaps smothering Kagome? It's sad to think that after all they've been through, Sesshomaru would even consider NOT having a child with Kagome...even if their childern would be half-demon. Does he still hold old grudges and prejudices? Even after mating a human, he can't get over his feelings for half-demons? In Elsewhere, it seemed to me that Sesshomaru would love, more than anything in the world, to have a child...to be a Father. Eh, maybe I'm wrong but that's how I see it.

I don't know, but I would DIE if Sesshomaru was my history professor...as much as my grades would suffer from taking his class (cuz I'm sure I would not be paying attention to the notes..lol). And perhaps you could put him in briefs??? Maybe he ran out of clean boxers and the only thing left is a sexy pair of tighty whities? LOL, now that's a sight!

I look forward to future chapters! Update soon!

~Bgatorgirl86


PS. If you are DESPERATE for a Beta you can contact me if you like. I did very well in my English Lit class last year, but now all I take are science and calculus classes, and I may be a bit rusty, but if you need someone to talk to or throw ideas back and forth, I'm here.

Hi there! I have been waiting for this story for a long time. I just loved elsewhere and I think you are a very talented writer. What made Kagome leave Sesshoumaru? It seemed to me that she was desperate to be with him at the end of the last story. I'm sure you will explain that in upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work.