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for Fumbling Toward Ecstacy

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person lost child
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update. It's been months. Please update, I want to know what happens. I loved Elsewhere and now I want to read the sequel, but I had yet to see an update. Please write.
person Kjinuyasha
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Elslewhere isnt finished yet is it?????

tell me because Im kinda like ooookaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy. What happened after she was like, Im not mad or whatever you wrote. You know what Im talkin bout right? Email me so I can know whats up.
person Julie
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see that you are writing again. I had all but given up on Elsewhere, and now another story?! These first two chapters are great and I look forward to reading more in the future!
person catseye
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wondered if there was going to be anything from " Elsewhere". Why did she want to leave in the first place. That lost me.I know she has a real thing for her "studies". but damn, that was like jr. high. Can she not reside herself to have the best of both worlds as it were. "Him" being the formost. She tamed the full blooded youkai, part becuz shes a miko, but most becuz of her spirt I think. she should not falter him now. To him, in his mind, his heart and his very being, she is in his life now. She needs to maybe rethink her actions yet again.

I do like what I have read thus far. But you did say you wanted some feedback. Did it help any? I hope so.
person catseye
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and by the way, Why should they not have a child sometime in the future? HMMMM??????? hehehehe!
person Sesshou\'s sweetie
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Im glad you decided to write a sequel!! Please please update! I think the first two chapters are awesome this is going to be a really interesting story! Keep up the great work!! Anyone that hasnt read Elsewhere should definetly read it! Dont keep us waiting for too long!! We love you!!!
person ceridwen
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again! I read "Elsewhere" a long time ago and was just checking up to see what other stories you'd come up with and oh my! Imagine my shocked delight at finding that you've started a sequel to "Elsewhere". I'm very interested in seeing your interpretation on a *not* so 'happily ever after' scenario...your character devolpment, can I just say, is really some of the best I've read in the fanfiction world (and actually, better than a lot I've encoutered that is non-fanfiction! ^_^;; ). I love the concept of the Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing but one has to search far and wide before finding authors that succeed at making this challenging pair 'work'. I really respect your work and hope you continue this story. Thanks!

-ceridwen
person Britt
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I loved Elsewhere so much and I am already into this sequel. Having him as her teacher is a great idea!
person taixonay
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what happened to your stories on anime spiral don't you like us anymore T_T??? anyway this was great!!!
person SesshomarusElement
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe this one is great. Though, I do hope that you will explain why she left him in the first place. Your thoughts are great in this story, and I hope you will conintue it. To say that this story is just interesting, would be a maddening lie, I think the situation is perfect. Please, please continue.

Forever in reading,
Sesshomaru'sElement